Website Critique Request

They have: 3 posts

Joined: Apr 2011

Hello all,

I have included a link for an e-commerce website I created. It is not entirely complete in terms of back-end functionality, but I am interested to know if this would be the kind of service that is of interest to other web developers.

http://www.algonquinstudents.ca/~barn0123/coherentcontent/

Thanks!

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She has: 11,421 posts

Joined: Jun 1999

I think this does a good job of selling the service and explaining what the site is offering. All of the content is very well written - demonstrating the quality of the services offered.

I don't like the stripey background. It's very distracting. I also think the box around the content could be re-worked. Maybe a solid background with rounded corners, or, to keep it simple, no background at all.

They have: 2 posts

Joined: Jul 2011

Just like Megan I don't like the striped background and I also think there is too much blue. The large blue box could have a much lighter blue. Other than that it looks fine

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They have: 23 posts

Joined: Oct 2009

I would suggest that you get rid of the sliced background. I can also say that while shades of blue is nice in general, you are using a very light tone and I would suggest to go with something darker.

Also a more dominant logo and homepage presence can help you attract more visitors as well as in terms of SEO.

Best of luck with the site ! Smiling

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