2nd attempt - needs review! (about bad breath and tonsil stones)
Hi
This is the 2nd version of this website I have created as the first became very outdated. It is also only the 2nd website I have ever built!
It's an information site with helpful (affiliate) links embedded in the text - please be as harsh or as nice as you like! - here's my website about Bad Breath
Thanks!
Will
Do you happen to be suffering from Bad Breath or Tonsil Stones? Well my website might just be able to help you out - www.badbreathhealth.com
Walter Warner posted this at 23:22 — 22nd February 2012.
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I like the rounded corners of the website. Part of me wants to really see some sort of logo or something that identifies the site. I am also not a fan of the dark blue background. If you want to keep that same blue background you should use that color within your site.
Markwest posted this at 12:57 — 29th February 2012.
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Agree with above user, there definitely should be more catchy header with some logo, or header slideshow or something like that. Anyway it should be "wow" header to grab more attention to your site. Also as for me, you should integrate more images on Homepage, make it more visually appealing. The content is okay, color combination is also nice looking.
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liyanting posted this at 17:15 — 20th March 2012.
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A very organized and informatic Website: simple but present.
For the Web Accessiblity, it is better for us to use the descriptive text to the hypelink intead of using "clicking here" ... ...
There is an orphan label found on the top right search box area.
Thanks
poundj posted this at 19:33 — 1st April 2012.
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Hi Will,
I agree with others that you have a nice clean-looking site. With respect to the logo issue that others have mentioned, one solution would be changing the background colour behind your identifier within the header so that it stands out more.
Your content looks great. The high contrast of the text on the white background makes it really easy to read. On the landing page, you have two sections of content that relates to other parts of your site. I would suggest that you turn the titles of your sections on Bad Breath and Tonsil Stones into links to the pages further in your site.
On the whole I think it's a great design.
thnong posted this at 17:14 — 3rd April 2012.
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I noticed that on the ‘Contact’ page that there are no email to send inquiries about a product or to leave feedbacks. Under the ‘Meta’ block, the ‘Login In’ was confusing because I thought it was to login in to the site. You should not have a login into Wordpress since it make easier for hacker to enter your site. You should make a bookmark for yourself instead.
It also would be nice to a link at the end of the article to go back instead of clicking on the Back button. It was hard for me to figure out how to leave comments. There should be a link at the bottom of the article in order to leave comments instead of making user clicking different links on the page.
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