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    <title>the  site is great!But i do</title>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;the  site is great!But i do not like the middle part of the page.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Wed, 22 Jun 2011 03:29:18 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>airun0622</dc:creator>
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    <title>The site is quite ok. The</title>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;The site is quite ok. The design is also great.&lt;br /&gt;
What you should work on is the domain. Is seems it is a free domain ... and that does not inspire me to buy.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Mon, 13 Jun 2011 23:00:39 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>aditd</dc:creator>
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    <title>First of all, it&#039;s easy to</title>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;First of all, it&#039;s easy to look at. Your pictures are very good and look professional. It&#039; clean which I think helps if you&#039;re trying to sell used stuff, especially for kids.&lt;br /&gt;
    You don&#039;t have a lot to offer yet, but I assume that&#039;s because you&#039;re a new site. Have you thought of checking out yard sales and thrift stores? You can&#039;t sell it if you don&#039;t stock it. We sold over fifty of our kid&#039;s old toys and stuffed animals at .25 and .50 cents apiece last summer and they were all in great condition. How about adding kids books or videos along with the toys.&lt;br /&gt;
    Now, please don&#039;t take this the wrong way, but you either need to slow down and re-read your text or have someone else critique it for you. You&#039;re missing a few s&#039;s here and there and a few in&#039;s and an&#039;s. For instance on the home page your sentence that reads &quot;You can always find great deal.&quot; should be changed to &quot;You can always find great deals.&quot; or &quot;You can always find a great deal.&quot; also the phrase that says &quot;Just show us the toys your kids are not interested any more&quot; should have the word &#039;in&#039; after interested. Kinda picky, I know but it&#039;s just more professional to use proper english.&lt;br /&gt;
    I&#039;m personally not too thrilled about a shopping cart that opens in a new window. I prefer to stay on the same page. Can you instead, put a &quot;continue shopping&quot; button on the PayPal shopping cart so a customer can easily come back to you if they want to buy more?&lt;br /&gt;
    Overall, a nice looking site that is easy to buy from. Just one last possible issue; Do you need permission from Disney to use that Mickey Mouse?&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Mon, 30 May 2011 17:40:14 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>vacshop</dc:creator>
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    <title>Overall, it&#039;s pretty good.</title>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Overall, it&#039;s pretty good. Nice work!&lt;br /&gt;
From my side, the only thing I would recommend to change is that different fonts usage. You have too much various fonts and fonts colors, some of them are quite hard to read&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Tue, 17 May 2011 11:42:23 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>Markwest</dc:creator>
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    <title>It&#039;s looks professional for a</title>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;It&#039;s looks professional for a e-commerce website. Well designed and clear structured with an easy navigation bar. Only thing that bother me is logo which should me more colorful and bigger.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Tue, 17 May 2011 10:46:09 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>ella1985</dc:creator>
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