The only things i'd say is

AJLComputers — Wed, 18 Nov 2009 12:36:26 +0000

The only things i'd say is the lack of wedding pictures in the wedding page, same for the portraits page.

I'm also not sure about having the menu at the top and the bottom, it makes me think that you wanted to put a base to the design but couldn't think what to put so just repeated the menu.

I might be tempted to add some small colour flourishes here and there, youd have to be careful not to ruin the clean look of the site but I think it could do with a bit of colour.

Hello Barry, You have done

whwkim — Mon, 16 Nov 2009 04:27:05 +0000

Hello Barry,

You have done great job.Your site is very nice.

Just one small problem.You can use another bright color instead of the light grey color.Because of this faint color its hard to read text.

hi Barry, clever use of

Irish Weddings Webmaster — Sun, 15 Nov 2009 18:39:53 +0000

hi Barry,

clever use of linktext in your post above.

Nice site and I can't really critque because I don't see much wrong with it!

Commerically speaking, I'd leave my prices off because it would generate more enquiries and therefore chances of conversion.

From a spam point of view I'd image your email address on the enquiry form so that it's not grabbed by bots.

Your HTML code is very clean and SEO optimsed to textbook level, well done.

Hi Barry, Sorry I didn't get

Megan — Thu, 12 Nov 2009 17:13:38 +0000

Hi Barry,

Sorry I didn't get back to you sooner. I accidentally overlooked your post in the queue.

This site looks pretty good. I like the clean, elegant design. This is exactly the sort of design that works perfectly for a photography site. I also like the swirly design in the top-right corner. It would be nice to see that featured more prominently (make it really big!)

One problem I see is that the light grey on top of white is very low contrast and the text can be hard to read. At the same time, the red "Christmas Gifts" text stands out too much. It's glarinly bright in comparison to the other text. Try something a bit less bright, and try green instead of red.

Another problem I see is that there's a lot of text here. When I was looking for a wedding photographer a few years ago the main thing I wanted to see was samples. And there aren't any here. Cut down on the text (nobody's going to read all that) and use your site to show off your work. That's how people will judge you.