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    <title>Looks very simply -its no</title>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Looks very simply -its no good.&lt;br /&gt;
If you want sell something, you need interested buyers.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;usability ~ 0&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Change desigh.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Tue, 21 Apr 2009 16:40:03 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>Brutal</dc:creator>
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    <title>Site needs some more</title>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Site needs some more attention.. it looks like it is just carved from html .. very simple make it more better buddy..&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Sat, 11 Apr 2009 15:47:56 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>krates</dc:creator>
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    <title>The site looks rather</title>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;The site looks rather amateurish, which might be a suitable strategy for a site like this. You might want it to look like a small operation and in that case a super sophisticated design isn&#039;t necessarily appropriate.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;In this case I think the design could be improved regardless. The colours are kind of garish and don&#039;t align well with the subject. I would go with something less saturated, maybe pulling colours from the main photo.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;The bevel on the top header is way too much - that needs to go. Also try using a more interesting font for the site title. Something more traditional looking (serif or script) would be appropriate here.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Try to avoid centering text. It makes things hard to read because the eye has to jump back and forth to find the start of the next line.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;If you are located in Canada, why are your prices in US dollars? If you&#039;re trying to sell to both markets, it would be good to list prices in both currencies.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Thu, 09 Apr 2009 13:37:36 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>Megan</dc:creator>
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