hmm The "leave now" link to

greg — Thu, 03 Jul 2008 15:01:00 +0000

hmm

The "leave now" link to google works fine for me
And the link box under "contact us" you mentioned has an ad in it

Anyone else get strange problems with these two?

EDIT:
the link to google only had two w's in it, ww.
Google should catch that, but I will fix it anyway, cheers!

Hey yes definitely more

sam132 — Thu, 03 Jul 2008 14:57:16 +0000

Hey yes definitely more colour. Also you have empty boxes with links attached to them, that dont seem to do anything? (Top right) and below contact us. I think an ad appears in the top right box in some pages. But it should be possible to get rid of this box. Also if you have created websites for others perhaps you should create a portfolio page where you can show these off? Also on your terms and conditions I did find the "if you do not agree please leave now" button with a incorrect link to google a bit pointless.

Since I may be busy or run

Eljey — Tue, 01 Jul 2008 15:23:09 +0000

Since I may be busy or run away from it all (I mean internet and computers) give me a note when you have finished tweaking.

Thanks for the offer But as

greg — Mon, 30 Jun 2008 14:49:45 +0000

Thanks for the offer
But as I have a lot of tweaking to do, especially on the Terms of Service page, when I've finished tweaking if you want you can run your eye across it then and tell me what you think

Cheers

If you need my detailed

Eljey — Mon, 30 Jun 2008 14:05:10 +0000

If you need my detailed feedback on the wording and grammar from the point of view of style, feel free to ask me and I'll do my best to suggest some improvements to you.

Eljey wrote: everything

greg — Mon, 30 Jun 2008 11:57:54 +0000

Eljey wrote:

everything that I say is just IMHO

That is what this area is about really.

I never take offence to anyone's feedback, and neither should anyone else.
Even if they state the site is completely terrible in every way possible, as long as they offer constructive feedback as to why they feel it's terrible it's a legitimate opinion and other visitors might think the same. So negative responses are potentially more important criticisms.

I did take note of what you said, other people also commented on the wording/grammatical structure too.

When I get time to start re-thinking the site colours, graphics and wording I will take into account what everyone has said.

Thanks again everyone!

greg wrote: Th Although I'm

Eljey — Mon, 30 Jun 2008 10:55:23 +0000

greg wrote:

Th
Although I'm not sure why Eljey asked if my native lang is English. I didnt think the text was THAT bad.

English is my first background and I am rather a perfectionist here (I mean as for the text from a linguistic point of view). I do not claim that I am very objective, everything that I say is just IMHO

I like your cool layout, but

Hafsoh — Fri, 27 Jun 2008 18:46:26 +0000

I like your cool layout, but yeah you need do more on designing add more colors!

Hope you achieve the look

demonhale — Fri, 27 Jun 2008 14:58:53 +0000

Hope you achieve the look you want. Just an additional note, white space is good if you know how to use them, make use of borders line breaks and don't get too concerned of putting graphics...

The general consensus is

greg — Fri, 27 Jun 2008 14:43:35 +0000

The general consensus is it's a little bland and most people have stated the logo text is bad.
I kinda knew that when I was making it, but it was taking ages to get a text in there to match the colours. The logo text colour is actually a gradient, to try to make it readable within the gradient background.

I think a serious re-think is in order rather than a few fixes here and there.
Although I'm not sure why Eljey asked if my native lang is English. I didnt think the text was THAT bad.

I guess I have a lot of designing and thinking to do.

Cheers people.