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    <title>I thought i would check your</title>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;I thought i would check your new site for you. &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;I really like it. It is hard to give any feedback to change for you.&lt;br /&gt;
But I will try real hard and find something&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;- I know its small but I think you should use some capital letter in the top left &quot;you are here&quot;&lt;br /&gt;
- Not sure why but you have faded the header, titles and the rss feed until you mouseover. Dont think you need to do that it would make the site a little bit brighter having the colours as they should be. &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Thats all I have. Great site.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Sun, 23 Mar 2008 00:26:09 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>akdiver</dc:creator>
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    <title>Vans, Cars, and</title>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Vans, Cars, and Leasing:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;This looks nice. I like the layout and the photos ad a lot of impact. The design does look a bit washed out to me. And I&#039;m on a desktop monitor right now - it&#039;s even paler on my laptop.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Try making things less grey and use the mouseover orange colour isntead of the paler version.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;http://www.lease-hire.co.uk&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;One thing I notice about this is that it could really use a better logo.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;The tagline here should also be shorter. There&#039;s too much to read there now, and something shorter could be catchier and have more impact on the reader.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Otherwise this site looks fine, if a bit generic. Try to create more character with the design. To go for a luxury look, try using more muted colours and a simpler design.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Some indication of your location would be helpful here - where can I hire cars from this site? That would probably be good for search engine keywords too.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Mark Anderson, Photographer&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;This site needs some layout help. The white background and simple design is good, you just want to add a few more design elements to create a sophisticated look.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;The images on the front page are good, but nobody&#039;s going to read that text especially since the font size is a little on the small size. Even using bold for key words would help the user to digest the information.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Fri, 25 Jan 2008 15:40:37 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>Megan</dc:creator>
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