benj — Thu, 12 Apr 2007 04:44:33 +0000

brianwiz;217651 wrote: In general very good. I would like to see text in the box to see how that affects the overalll view. Put a copy of paragraphs in there just to see if anything gets moved around or distorted

Thanks. I'm still writing up my content for the home page, but I have tried filling the page with temporary content and it looks fine, no problems with stuff lining up, etc. But I will put the final stuff in there tomorrow or in a couple days, so check back.

Any more comments, please, I need all the feedback I can get!!

brianwiz — Tue, 10 Apr 2007 20:55:27 +0000

In general very good. I would like to see text in the box to see how that affects the overalll view. Put a copy of paragraphs in there just to see if anything gets moved around or distorted

benj — Tue, 10 Apr 2007 05:10:15 +0000

*bump*

Can I get some more critiquing on the draft site in general?

benj — Wed, 04 Apr 2007 20:12:33 +0000

Megan;217388 wrote: The left column looks fine now. You could start the body area with an introduction explaining what it is that you do (specifically, with good keywords for search engines). Then show an example of your most recent job or a highlight from your profile. Make sure there are links to other parts of the site and calls to action for the user.

You might find this interesting: "Great Homepages Really Suck"

As you see, I've recently added the things on the left...

That link really helps, thanks! I guess I should have explained better what my problem was. That's really interesting though about drawing people into the website. Because in the past I've tried to give a huge summary on the home page.

Megan — Wed, 04 Apr 2007 13:23:09 +0000

The left column looks fine now. You could start the body area with an introduction explaining what it is that you do (specifically, with good keywords for search engines). Then show an example of your most recent job or a highlight from your profile. Make sure there are links to other parts of the site and calls to action for the user.

You might find this interesting: "Great Homepages Really Suck"

Busy — Wed, 04 Apr 2007 10:11:18 +0000

How about a blurb about how your services could be used or how effective they are on the interweb - basically sell yourself