timjpriebe — Tue, 27 Feb 2007 18:38:13 +0000

Uh, this critique thread is for mywebsitework.com, not the site you were looking at.

Website Made Simple

Ikpong — Tue, 27 Feb 2007 18:25:27 +0000

Hi ,
I am Augustine Ikpong studying Internet Application Programmer somewhere in Ottawa, Canada. Presently, I have a course in my programme - E-commerce which reqiures an assesssment of a website and as such I am critiquing yours.
Your website looks simple and well thoughtout.
I have a few comments to make.
The lower spot titled Our Advantage has texts that do not contrast well with the background color.
Another thing, the person on the picture 'experiencing the freedom' is like he is actually looking for help, the action does not portray freedom.
Under e-commerce, then simple e-commerce page, payment methods should include Visa, Master Card, and other online payment methods insteads of Paypal only, it should be customer friendly.

Thanks
Augustine Ikpong.

etuk0002 — Mon, 26 Feb 2007 18:14:47 +0000

hey,

I love the simplicity of your webpages, but i feel you might want to do something about the orange and blue color scheme. When i opened the last link on the page, i realised my eyes had been trying to adjust to the bright colors of the previous pages.The last page just sort of calmed them down.

rencal — Tue, 30 Jan 2007 17:16:42 +0000

The blue and orange on the white is a little hard to read but otherwise nice clean site

Magnolia — Sun, 31 Dec 2006 01:22:35 +0000

Very nice and clean - does what it says on the tin - with no confusion

timjpriebe — Thu, 14 Dec 2006 13:24:05 +0000

I'll have to check when I get back to my home office later tonight. But which template's title are you looking at?

cbc58 — Thu, 14 Dec 2006 00:20:16 +0000

Nice and simple.

What font did you use for the title?

timjpriebe — Thu, 07 Dec 2006 03:57:23 +0000

I actually meant remove the existing picture and add a different one with no person in it, just a laptop with screenshot or monitor with screenshot.

And I changed the name of the Corporate template to Corporate Male and added Corporate Female as a third template. Same thing as Corporate Male, but with a female.

teammatt3 — Thu, 07 Dec 2006 01:13:23 +0000

Quote: Matt,

Do you think that it might be better just to have a laptop (or monitor) with a screenshot than someone actually sitting there with a laptop? Or maybe even just a screenshot?

If you add another computer to the page I think it will look a little over zealous because you already have an image of a laptop in the middle content area.

Just thought of something: when people register, you can have them fill out if they are male or female. If they are male, have that same pic, if they are female, have a picture like that, but in a dress or something.

timjpriebe — Wed, 06 Dec 2006 17:44:46 +0000

I've worked in a couple of different state-level government agencies. I know that accessibility is required at least some in the federal government sites, but not yet in the state level. And I doubt it will ever be completely required in the US for businesses, though I could be wrong. It may be the type of thing where if you redesign your site you have to add it in.

I hadn't ever heard of accesskey, so thanks for the info. I did a bit of research into it, and it looks like browser support is pretty shaky right now. It's a great idea, though, so I hope support improves for it in the future.

Thanks for the info, conrad!