heebiejeebieclu — Thu, 27 Jul 2006 12:55:08 +0000

Please don't be angry at Greg. He is just giving his opinion, which is what he asked for. The fact that he has given you feedback on your site and not told you to scrap the whole thing is very encouraging. When he said "I would leave after two seconds" he's not being personal, just addressing an issue that's very important in webmastering - how appealing is the front page, and are visitors so put off that they'll leave the site immediately? The only way you're gonna find this out is to talk to real visitors (not a chance that you can obtain easily) and Greg's done exactly that. Continue improving your site, and all of us here will help you turn it into a masterpiece

As for my thoughts, I think you've got the right idea with the layout, you just need to improve some of the cosmetics. Drop the comic sans font, it makes me gag , and try a cleaner look, with (dare I say it) a white background. Good luck!

Greg K — Thu, 27 Jul 2006 08:28:58 +0000

.::Mc2::.® wrote: what about the www.khattam.com ??

Sorry I missed this. This site has better layout, and a lot cleaner images. The only problem I noticed offhand was that in firefox, the text from the "Message Board" flows down into the next section, making it unreadable.

-Greg

Greg K — Wed, 26 Jul 2006 05:03:18 +0000

You can do what you want with my site. I didn't come here asking people what they think of it. YOU DID.

If all you got were reviews that told you they liked it, how would you know what to improve? Obviously my review did some good, as you say you are going to redesign it. Do not get discouraged by it, take it as a learning experience where are you do more, the more you will learn and your skill swill greatly improve. You know what would keep me from staying at your site, and as it is possible the same things would sicourage others from staying, you know what to look into improving.

The good part about being here is if you have trouble with improving parts, you can always ask in other sections for how to fix things, there are many (including myself) who would help you figure it out.

Again, please do not become discouraged, use this to help figure out what to improve upon. I only gave my honest opinion of what i thought upon coming across your site. You call the site a business on the one page, and it just does not give that impression at all. Hopefully with practice and help from the forums here your site will grow much better.

-Greg

.::Mc2::.® — Wed, 26 Jul 2006 01:15:18 +0000

and i am going to re degine the whole site from today , so please don't review now. Thanks to greg , ( cuz of him i lost my courage)

.::Mc2::.® — Wed, 26 Jul 2006 01:12:24 +0000

Greg K wrote: For me on firefox, the links on the left side are hard to click becasue some of them you can only click in maybe the top 1/3 of the "button" or less.

The graphic quality is very poor, and alignment seems to be all over the place.

Basically, it is a site that I would leave after looking at 2 seconds.

-Greg

Greg !! hmp..... that was very unnice to say that!! i would won't visit ur site at all !!!

.::Mc2::.® — Wed, 26 Jul 2006 01:09:01 +0000

what about the khattam.com ??

Greg K — Wed, 26 Jul 2006 00:52:24 +0000

For me on firefox, the links on the left side are hard to click becasue some of them you can only click in maybe the top 1/3 of the "button" or less.

The graphic quality is very poor, and alignment seems to be all over the place.

Basically, it is a site that I would leave after looking at 2 seconds.

-Greg

.::Mc2::.® — Tue, 25 Jul 2006 23:39:55 +0000

the reason for most link to not working is because i haven't hyper linked them yet cuz i have n't created page for that

.::Mc2::.® — Tue, 25 Jul 2006 23:39:09 +0000

hey , ok thanks for suggetions , anything more ??

Gmarvz — Tue, 25 Jul 2006 15:57:19 +0000

hi,

Your site needs alot of redesigning.(take it as positive)

My Comments:

Negative:

- Most of the links are not working.

- Too much empty space below

- The whole lay-out is not centered.

- No interactive/Dynamic contents

- The header/banner needs to be replaced with a much better one.

- Needs to have a noticable objective of the site itself

...nothing much to do there.

Positive:

- Nice decision to use cbox as a tagboard..i really like cbox

I think you can do alot better than that..if you need my help just P.M me