timjpriebe — Mon, 23 Jan 2006 14:54:03 +0000

I have to agree with Tony. Anyone who actually thinks that this product will change their life, even after reading Sprint's site, has pretty much lost touch with reality. You need exciting copy to get people to use your product, even when it's free.

aboyd — Sun, 22 Jan 2006 02:40:17 +0000

Benjamin wrote: The people in the pictures look very cheezy.

True.

Benjamin wrote: Why not be honest and say, " Our website promotion may not change your life, but if you are willing to try our service, hopefully you will find that it was a good choice."

That comes off like "hey, we're mediocre." The graphics could be less cheesy, true. But that doesn't mean he should have a lukewarm message. If he's excited about the site and wants to express it, he should. It may make others excited.

-Tony

Benjamin — Fri, 20 Jan 2006 21:51:41 +0000

Why try to make your service seem as though it will blow your costumers away and change their lives? Why not tell the truth?

timjpriebe — Fri, 20 Jan 2006 15:55:41 +0000

As someone who has used stock images on a few sites (here, here and here), I know it's often hard to get just the right fit of what you're trying to get your site to convey with photos. Custom photos aren't easy, stock photos are much less so. So I think you did a decent job of using photos, even though they are slightly cheesy.

Benjamin — Fri, 20 Jan 2006 00:18:00 +0000

The people in the pictures look very cheezy. Why not be honest and say, " Our website promotion may not change your life, but if you are willing to try our service, hopefully you will find that it was a good choice."

Busy — Thu, 19 Jan 2006 22:00:37 +0000

Firefox blocked a pop up.
That picture on left side, the one with the woman totally surprised, could it be a reaction from a wedgie? cause he looks pretty happy about himself

Your FAQ is interesting:

Quote: What kind of guarantee do you offer?
* When you become a member of the Affluent Romance Company we guarantee to find you a woman who goes beyond your highest expectations, in looks, education, intelligence, positive and friendly attitude, who enjoys the same types of activities you do, and much much more. Our money back guarantee is as follows: If after using our services for the life of your membership and you still have not found the woman of your dreams then we will provide full 100% unconditional refund with no questions or hard feeling on our part, no that's confidence!

I think the layout or probably just the colours look a little cheesy, I think you need to put the 'tips' above the form or people could just add anyone into the form (non site owners) also when the copyright name is different to the site name it often looks like it's an affiliate program.

demonhale — Thu, 19 Jan 2006 17:27:52 +0000

looks a ok... targets and first impression leads me a sort of a niche site, with something to still prove...

robfenn — Thu, 19 Jan 2006 15:16:17 +0000

Looks so dubious though! You say it has been mentioned in News Today etc. So where are the press cuttings?

timjpriebe — Thu, 19 Jan 2006 14:39:11 +0000

Looks pretty obvious to me.