steve40 — Fri, 27 Jan 2006 19:51:50 +0000

Looks pretty good, blue just isn't one of my favorites for a web-site. I am currently working on an up-date to one, and used a background gift similar to yours. After looking at it long enough, I decided the stripes make reading just a little cluttered. So I just used it on the navigation side of the page. No complaints, just something to consider.

masterj — Fri, 27 Jan 2006 09:34:12 +0000

willjoe86 wrote: http://www.geocities.com/wimball86

The above site is a pretty simple site....I used a starter page from dreamweaver and modified it a bunch.

Since this is my first, any and all suggestions will be greatly appreciated.

Thanks!

Will

Maybe I'm just being picky... but the grammar seems a bit off. There are no semicolons or commas where there should be etc.

Also, I seem to be repeating what a lot of others have already said, but the grey writing seems to blend with the dark background too well and I think a bit of contrast would be better.

PCBOY123 — Fri, 27 Jan 2006 01:22:39 +0000

joemeca wrote: nice start now get rid of geocities by a domain from godaddy and get it hosted cheap

i agree!

i have godaddy great service! had them for about 3yrs +

WesB86 — Thu, 26 Jan 2006 04:00:12 +0000

I've got to agree with the too dark. And like Janet said maybe just adding another color might break it up a bit. The color on the left nav menu might be easier to read if it was bold or bigger. What about putting some kind of text or search bar in the horizontal table?

Alright, BUT!!

Pramith — Fri, 13 Jan 2006 08:37:18 +0000

The sites OK 4 a starter. Its great, But Pls do not use geocities. The URl is too long. Use a free web host like 50webs.com or atspace.com no banner ads at all and the URL is short too. But if u want to keep your geocities account shorten the URL by going to freedomain.co.nr you just use your domain name with a co.nr at the end.
I did it with my site,
http://www.affiliatemasters.co.nr

totalnewbie — Fri, 13 Jan 2006 01:27:35 +0000

I like it! I agree it is a little dark, and maybe the background stripes are a little distracting. Also, on my screen there is a lot of unused space on the righthand side. Super job for a first website!

Choppy

webspace — Thu, 12 Jan 2006 22:49:09 +0000

I think the background in conjuntion with the font makes the page look a bit choppy. That's really all I have to say about that. How long did it take you to create your first website?

Austers — Thu, 12 Jan 2006 19:06:04 +0000

I like the layout a lot. Its very professional and for a first it is incredibly good. Everything is clear.

willjoe86 — Thu, 12 Jan 2006 04:44:41 +0000

Thanks everyone!

Any other suggestions, feel free to throw them at me!

Janet — Thu, 12 Jan 2006 02:24:32 +0000

Hi, nice simple site, I like it. Like some of the others have mentioned it is alittle dark. Just bringing in a different color will help a lot. I really like the color fade in the banner, however it seems slightly off to me. There seems to be too much space between the logo and wording to the right. Could be just me, though. The site is very easy to navigate and it is not too cluttered.