pcmcia167 — Tue, 20 Sep 2005 18:28:18 +0000

Yes, templates are the best option. There are thousands of templates that have been professionally designed and published for free. I would go with http://www.templatesbox.com/templates.htm I have used a few before. They are easy to modify, and they are not just the photoshop file(includes website and all). The site you have now is UGLY! The content is good, for now. But concentrate on getting rid of the purple and the banner. There are some pretty awsome banner/logo templates too. Everything else everbody has written is great advice!

Lucas Sawyer
Family-Guy-Clips.org

DaveyBoy — Mon, 19 Sep 2005 02:46:07 +0000

Yeah i agree with pretty much everything that people have said so far. It really does feel like i've stepped back into 1995 or something. I think you really should just take this back to the drawing board, find colours that work together - light purple and that grey colour don;t really 'gel' together nicely for me. Try not to make the navigation look like it has just been 'plonked' on as an after-thought, intergrate it into a nice design so it looks like it's meant to be there.

If you want to get taken seriously, you will need to either enhance this site an awful amount or simply get somebody to create one for you. There's plenty of templates that would cater for your needs too.

Busy — Sun, 18 Sep 2005 11:34:19 +0000

Built with sitebuilder.

Ok I gather this is your first or one of your first sites you've made but I honestly think you have gone and figured out everything that shouldn't be done and gone and done it.
Most of the things have already been mentioned above, but my main two concerns are the spam words used in the lower section of your site (it's not a porn site ya know) and the main one would be 'way to much information'. I come to your page and think OMG i want to buy a house (or get it inspected or whatever you do) not site down and read war and peace or work out the meaning of life. (sorry for being so blunt).

You have a lot of information, which is good, but seperate it, I know nothing about your field but you have to look at it from my angle as I would be the type of person looking to hire you. Break the site down into section, main, buyer and seller.
While the .pdf files are a great touch, why use .pdf? (why does anyone use pdf), pdf is blurry, hard to read, usually big in file size, not really portable because of size and restrictions in versions and not everybody has the reader (it's a download, not part of windows).
I go to the sellers page, I see a link at the top for a pdf file, yet there is heaps of written text on the screen, is this the same thing? and to the left under the links is something about another pdf file which is 570kb, I am on dialup so would never d/l that, instead would go find an inspector who uses plain html or even just plan text file.

Your picture (no offence) is scary, you have a posed smile (a fake smile produced when asked to smile), looks like you just wet your pants and need to be else where. If you aren't photo genic and not everyone is get some one to follow you around and snap some candid shots (dont pose or try to pose) and this usually gives a good pic of a non photo genic person. there is another way to 'trick' you into a real smile but the person taking the pics only needs to know, if you know about it, it wont work.
Anyways back to the site.
None of your pages actually have page titles, so you wouldn't know what page you were on.
The fianting goats is a site you can base yours on, it's only one page but has lots of sections, you need to break your site down into sections like this (each section a page of it's own though and forget the spam words at the bottom. oops ok the goats site has more than one page, so forget them, just the main page as example as all that should be on seperate pages.

From a home buyer, I'd want, fast, friendly advice and would want to trust you from the get go, after all buying a house to some people is a once in a life time event. dump the spam, be honest, earn our trust and respect, don't try, just be yourself and you'll go far.

inet_ventures — Sat, 17 Sep 2005 22:23:39 +0000

Aaron,
I don't want to be too critical because everyone has to start somewhere

If you really want to do the design yourself may I suggest you take a look at some professionally designed templates? There are many available and they may help you get the professional and personable look and feel you are wanting.

As the web site is now there is no flow. My eyes immediately jump all over the place as it seems you want to give out a lot of information too quickly. Think about why I, as a possible customer would be visiting your web site and then lead me further into your web site to get more information.

The fonts on the left-side buttons are too hard to read, some of the graphics are very poor quality, your text margins need to be justified, there are too many different fonts used and you are definitely spamming the search engines - everything below this line will get you penalized by most search engines (Visit a complete list of WebRing memberships here).

I think the goal of your web site is for me to be able to gather enough information about you so I can decide whether or not I can have confidence in you to do a professional job for me. Can I trust you to do an inspection on one of the most expensive financial obligations that I will every make. Your web site needs to instill that confidence in me and I'm afraid that as it is now, most people will be pushed away from doing business with you. And probably pretty quickly too. If I was to judge your professional skills based upon this web site (which people will do) then I would not be hiring you.

Take the time to investigate either getting a professional web designer or purchasing a professionally made template. Spend your time writing the content. Content is every bit as important as design.

I hope some of these suggestions help and I apologize if I was too critical.

Sam Warren
Picnic-Basket.com

dougadam — Sat, 17 Sep 2005 16:14:42 +0000

You need to be careful of spamming.

Dedicated Home Inspection Services- Home inspections by Aaron Pfaff Certified Home Inspector in Wisconsin Serving Southeastern Wisconsin

reggaetonking — Sun, 04 Sep 2005 00:13:43 +0000

Now its looks better, this site isnt bad for a first attempt at it

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steveswift79 — Fri, 02 Sep 2005 04:43:02 +0000

Looks pretty good. I'd put your contact info under your picture. There is a lot of empty space, WHY? If you're trying to hide the links at the bottom, why not create a links page and use a simple, subtle ~~Links~~ hyperlink?

demonhale — Fri, 02 Sep 2005 01:59:47 +0000

Whats with the long space after the main content and all the links and google stuff as well as hiding keywords waaaay down?
Its ok as a start, but you need to redo it to standout...

bja888 — Fri, 02 Sep 2005 00:43:51 +0000

Ouch My eyes!!! That is beyond all hope of recovery. Start over!!

You can just go to my web site and pay a 20$ for a template. Then just put your website content in it. You proubally dont need to learn everything that has to do with website deign.

tony873004 — Fri, 02 Sep 2005 00:33:30 +0000

Hi. I don't like red letters against a blue background. Some of your subpages have red headings. It's just a weird contrast.