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    <description> &lt;p&gt;I&#039;m going to go ahead and put my vote down for adding more keyword-rich content Maybe intersperse text with the blocks. &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Also, robfen is right, no ones gonna miss those obscure meta tags, using only title, keyword, discription and character set. &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;As for the structure of forms and other interactive areas and functions, they look pretty good. I didn&#039;t test everything but you should to check for bugs so your users do not find them first. &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;As I am looking, you haven&#039;t corrected the fact that nothing jumps right out at you that declares what the site is, as locatepeople stated. Perhaps that contigent on your meeting with the client. &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;I&#039;m a big fan of simplicity when it causes the user to focus on content rather than the prett gizmos. All in all, a nice job! &lt;img src=&quot;https://www.webmaster-forums.net/misc/smileys/big.png&quot; title=&quot;Laughing out loud&quot; alt=&quot;Laughing out loud&quot; class=&quot;smiley-content&quot; /&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Sun, 19 Jun 2005 23:41:01 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;blockquote class=&quot;bb-quote-body&quot;&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;demonhale wrote:&lt;/strong&gt; I mean the designer&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Ah right.  Sorry I understand now &lt;img src=&quot;https://www.webmaster-forums.net/misc/smileys/big.png&quot; title=&quot;Laughing out loud&quot; alt=&quot;Laughing out loud&quot; class=&quot;smiley-content&quot; /&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;That will be going live within the next week hopefully.  Its very cool as it allows you to design business cards onine through a Flash interface...&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Thanks all for the feedback, there&#039;s some great stuff in there and I&#039;ll be talking through all the points raised with the client next week...&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Sun, 19 Jun 2005 12:36:42 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;The website is quite cool but like some of the other users on here I feel it&#039;s a bit plain. There is too much white space and not enough content.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;The navigation bar could do with being divided and put into groups of related links. As it is it&#039;s just a long daunting list that is a bit difficult to find exactly what you are looking for.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;I definitely think that it&#039;s got the potential to be great. I reckon if there is more content on it and the design is tweaked a bit and the space used more efficiently it could be great.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;I like the sparse use of colours too. It&#039;s not harsh on the eyes and really easy to look it. I also really like the logo in the top left corner. It&#039;s simple but effective.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Good work so far.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Sun, 19 Jun 2005 11:28:30 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;This design is a bit plain.  Also, I found the column of radio buttons with the &#039;Update&#039; button at the bottom confusing.  Update what?  Some instructions please, or detect the browser and if JavaScript is on and do what is required.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Peter&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Sat, 18 Jun 2005 16:30:48 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;I mean the designer&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Fri, 17 Jun 2005 21:39:59 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;quite a clean cut design. Think you should have a much more clean cut title though to say what your website is actually about. When I look at any web page I want to know what it is generally about almost instantly.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt; The £50 for 5000 buisnes cards sounds interesting. If you&#039;d offer me £10 for 1000 you&#039;d have a sale, 5000 is a bit much for me - i&#039;d need to eat them or something.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Fri, 17 Jun 2005 18:11:57 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Yeh I agree the nav bar is the same issue that keeps coming up...&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Will speak to the client on that one...&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Fri, 17 Jun 2005 10:48:50 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;like the design, but have to agree with Busy, the blocks are a bit big for my taste. and the same as megan in that it took a little while to work out what it was all about.&lt;br /&gt;
I found that the &quot;Pay Online&quot; jumped into my face as soon as I opened the site which is either good or bad depending on your angle. Else clean and neat but some pages a bit sparce on content, maybe too many links that could be included on the one page?&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Fri, 17 Jun 2005 07:37:07 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Haven&#039;t actually implemented them yet and the site&#039;s live? &lt;img src=&quot;https://www.webmaster-forums.net/misc/smileys/confused.png&quot; title=&quot;Confused&quot; alt=&quot;Confused&quot; class=&quot;smiley-content&quot; /&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Fri, 17 Jun 2005 07:31:56 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;I guess you followed all the suggestions above, I visited your site and well its quite neat and clean... Simple but effective... &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Guess youll have to repost when you go live...&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Fri, 17 Jun 2005 03:45:07 +0000</pubDate>
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