Busy — Fri, 27 May 2005 11:05:07 +0000

I've merged the two posts, hence the misalignment of the posts

bryntwr, please review a few sites as per the posting agreement, you have been asked before but you continue to spam the boards.
Our rules are very simple and we'd like to keep TWF a happy (spam free) community, if you have an issue with this, please contact myself or another moderator and we will be happy to show you the door.

Hey

demonhale — Fri, 27 May 2005 09:28:26 +0000

Yo Moderator, two of the same review request are posted already here...

good

demonhale — Fri, 27 May 2005 08:48:43 +0000

Good layout, modest load time, cross browser compatible with ie6, mozilla firefox and opera7... The logout is out of place yes, copyright notices are lacking especially that its software distribution, About us could have been explained more... Hope that helps

I am also a newbie

Natercia — Fri, 27 May 2005 05:24:20 +0000

I like the your business idea, very cool. I am wondering why the Logout is on the Homepage. Also, that picture on top is not very fresh and snazzy. But it's very to the point, and the business probably will sell itself by reputation. I hope that helps.

Busy — Thu, 26 May 2005 22:51:05 +0000

You're asking for a website review so I'll move this over to the proper forum. You will need to comply with the posting agreement.

Hi please visit www.smiversonline.com/index2.htm and give me re

bryntwr — Thu, 26 May 2005 21:24:43 +0000

Hi please visit smiversonline.com/index2.htm i have just lanched the site please give me reviews on my site it would be nice , if you have any idea could you please contact me about the site

02bunced — Thu, 26 May 2005 15:55:27 +0000

My thoughts:

Is the flash introduction needed - the water seems to bear no relation to the rest of the site, and it just takes up load time. You need content to be accessible within 20 seconds max or you loose a sale - not good for an online business.

I find the text a bit hard to read on my monitor - can you have black on white instead of white on black, even if it means putting a little area in the background that is white. It will again make things easier for the reader - ultimetly, the easier a site is, the more chance you have of a sale.

On the contact page, you have a rollover set-up for the menus, but not on any of the other pages.

Hope this is useful
David

dogdropins — Thu, 26 May 2005 14:22:23 +0000

hi i like the flash intro but once you get into the site its abit plane, just add some colour and it could be a good site.

apart from that i link the site the layout is good (apart from the colour)

from matt

Megan — Thu, 26 May 2005 14:06:25 +0000

Hi, bryntwr. When you posted this thread you saw our posting agreement. We'd appreciate it if you would follow the guidelines there and review some other sites. If there is some reason why you can't or don't want to do this please let us know. If you need some help in writing your review we have created these tips for writing website reviews.