Assassin — Sat, 28 May 2005 07:34:47 +0000

Content good, display newbie. You fill a lot of absolute must haves of a website. Your site is readable and (relatively) attractive. The problem being, I see the page and think, eh this kid made a little website and plopped some content into a decent format and thinks he's done.

I see this website as what should be the first in a series of formats. You will want to revamp this completely within the next few weeks. If you are going to use this background, make your text #000000 the current color is a little off.(I don't know what it is, I looked at your CSS briefly and decided it wasn't worth the hasel, my appologies, but it's 2:30 in the morning). You have to change that title, man. Why are you advertising your host so hardcore? It says bravenet twice right in your title. You won't get any search results off of that.

Tabs look all right, they're very "I just learned XHTML/CSS but I learned it pretty well." You know what your doing, time to get artistic.

You need some links on your joke pages. You could even make a simple list of text links at the top and have tag pairs like and then before the why ask why one section This way people don't have to scroll so much. The internet is for people who are to lazy to walk to a library, keep that in mind.

You're doing well, you seem new at this and you need to continue to look at websites and think, "what makes this a good/bad website?" and try to emulate the good and eliminate the bad.

thanks

demonhale — Sat, 28 May 2005 00:51:22 +0000

thanks man, i hope u red my original thread, sorry to this threads owner. Anyway the site isnt yet consistent coz I got 3 alternative home(front) page, as you can see other links are not yet fixed. Thanks a lot coz ill be making more contemporary design which ive done before with html and dhtml, javascript at http://demonhale.tripod.com/halestorm/index2.html, this one has an overflowing text and background field... hope to get more feedbacks soon

vibins — Fri, 27 May 2005 16:26:36 +0000

Demon hale whats up with that horible background image make it simple, and using css to keep background images in the same place my be the most annoying thing in the world.
If you just fixed that yoir site would be great because it distracts you from the content.
and a constant color scheme would be nice cuz you can never tell if your still on your site or not.

02bunced — Fri, 27 May 2005 15:57:21 +0000

Quote: Please review mine too at http://demonhale.tripod.com

Nothing like canvasing for reviews!

Hi YA!

demonhale — Fri, 27 May 2005 09:37:22 +0000

Coll Idea on a site... But you dont need Dreamweaver to build a graphically cool site, simple is better, fast is best, content is the ultimate...

Please review mine too at http://demonhale.tripod.com

01wojtowicz — Wed, 25 May 2005 19:42:02 +0000

THE COLOURS HAVE BEEN CHANGED
do you like them

01wojtowicz — Wed, 25 May 2005 18:00:53 +0000

yes its all been done for free.....Im not exactly made of money and

Quote: I am using it for a few months as i get a site builder and free hosting with it

vibins — Wed, 25 May 2005 16:36:21 +0000

Is this a free template
it says

Quote: This Website Built and Hosted for Free at Bravenet.com

01wojtowicz — Wed, 25 May 2005 06:17:14 +0000

Quote: "The greatest new site on the Internet!"

yep im working on that!

Quote: As others have mentioned, the red color scheme is a little hard on the eyes. Not that the color scheme itself is bad, just that a much lighter color should be used as the main background of the page.

Thats being changed
:flame:

GoToMyWebSite — Wed, 25 May 2005 04:56:59 +0000

Nice website there is some really funny stuff on there!