Busy — Sun, 05 Jun 2005 11:37:12 +0000

at least you have a skip intro link, thats a bonus, no idea what the flash thing was, dont have flash installed.
You need to watch out when copying and pasting HTML, and naming files, %20 is what browsers, search engines and others use for a space, so do, others just ignore it and move on. dont use spaces in page names, not finished.html should be not_finished.html
also on your form you have a %20 before the http:

You have a 'valid CSS' image and link on your page, why not make use of the CSS and do get rid of the font tags at least, there is a bit there that could be replaced by CSS. ALso don't use width="100%" on images.

As for the actual pages, not one, but two scrolling marquees, one is bad enough but one on either side is crimnal
The idea is there, just a bit of fine tuning needed, like making all your links green and something on hover instead of having darkblue as link colour now as it doesnt show up on the blue background. link size also needs to be bigger.

demonhale — Fri, 03 Jun 2005 00:43:15 +0000

delete the flash intro, read my comments above, that would help...

vibins — Thu, 02 Jun 2005 18:06:49 +0000

lose the flash.
Fix the pictures save them as gifs so they dont blur

karriston — Thu, 02 Jun 2005 15:07:27 +0000

.....Is that it? Nobody else has anything to say? Come on I put time into this, please tell me how to improve I beg you!

wwwben — Tue, 31 May 2005 02:37:06 +0000

the new site is much better .. still allot of blue but the page is readablr and very functional. Much Improved!

Hey Dude

demonhale — Tue, 31 May 2005 02:34:16 +0000

I know were both beginners but here goes.

You really like blue dont you??? I checked out both versions of your site, I like the old one without the white banners at the side.. You still use blue a lot too... And BTW you could have done better with the graphic text, I notice some pixelation... Other than those it would be better. I havent checked your codes, maybe when youre really finished I'll check it out...

karriston — Mon, 30 May 2005 16:57:28 +0000

Megan wrote: Merged threads to keep all comments together. (this is referenced in the posting agreement)

Ooops, thought the old one died a long time ago.......

Megan — Mon, 30 May 2005 16:47:17 +0000

Merged threads to keep all comments together. (this is referenced in the posting agreement)

It's me again!

karriston — Mon, 30 May 2005 16:07:32 +0000

I've been working on this site for a bit now and I think it's coming together quite nicely. Now, for those of you that saw and remember my last site, it was in shambles, the HTML was all wrong, the css was really bad aswell, the colours hurt your eyes and some other things that I can't remember. But at least I tried now, onto the new site. I made this site because I found some people on the internet wanting a clan site, so I thought this would be a nice little project to help me start HTML. Now I've been learning HTML for a few months, and here's the fruit of my labour. Hope you enjoy! I encourage you to look at my source and pick out every last thing that annoys you. I'm a big boy I can take it. Just rate me like someone who's new to HTML, but has a general idea what they're doing.

P.s. Some of the pages aren't finished yet. I wanted to here your opinions before I finish. also, the login won't work. this is because I'm learning PHP and I want to do all this myself. Plus, tell me if something looks wrong on your browser.

P.s.s. On the members and information page, the writing goes beyond one page, and the menu seems to come with it. Can some tell me how to stop this, I tried changing the height of the but it doesn't seem to work.

The link is: http://www.freewebs.com/thebluelions
Please don't be put off because it's freewebs, I found another host that's free AND supports PHP without any banners, just 1 ad, but I couldn't be bothered moving the sites at the minute :csaw:

dancindaz — Sun, 08 May 2005 07:58:29 +0000

well sorry but the blue freaks me out. I love blue but on my old laptop I cant read the title. I guessed this was a gamin clan site and I remembered my freinds ...
he has worked on on site for the past year.... only to letsomeone else take over... his site is gone but he could help.

hes called spikemeister and he plays socom. have a chat and he may help
shadow-legion.co.uk

but not really my thing

sorry