SEScoops — Sat, 07 May 2005 19:25:17 +0000

I agree that top banner is way too big.. The nature of the site is great but you've gotta tighten things up a bit.

vibins — Fri, 06 May 2005 18:31:55 +0000

a good way to fix the banner would be to have the leves fade into white out to the right and set the background color to white to the right of it inbetween the green lines this means on most screen sizes There will be no horizontal scrolling

Review

wwwben — Fri, 06 May 2005 10:51:07 +0000

Well i think that the top is kinda big and it should match up with the bottom better ..by making it wider ,take the beginning of the bottom background image and take make it solid whit so that when the page is extended wide you cannot tell that the image starts/stops. other than that clean up that html a little and your good. but remember this is just my opinion if your happy with the page then our advice is just our personal preference. The page is functional the way it is and the color plan is great.

karriston — Wed, 04 May 2005 18:01:42 +0000

Everyone is way to harsh. There is nothing wrong with the site in my opinion!

It looks nice, well presented and good colours. The shoutbox adds a feel of community to the site.

Now, onto the source code......

I'm much like you. My source code is always a mess and I can never find what I'm looking for when I go to make changes. But if it works, I don't think there is any problem. Doesn't really matter how you do it as long as it gets done.

Well done on a great site!

JP Stones — Mon, 02 May 2005 21:18:24 +0000

one thing i have as apet hate is css link mouse overs where the text goes from normal to bold, it shifts the other tegs around and just feels unprofessional. why not use colour to highlight the mouseover

my two cents

well as im english my two pence

vibins — Mon, 02 May 2005 18:12:45 +0000

You have two body tags and the title should be in the haed

<title>Back to the Natural Lifestyle - Raw Food Home and Chat</title>
<head>
<meta name="keywords" content="raw food, raw food support, why raw food, raw food recipes, raw food help, raw food chat, natural curing, self curing, raw food pictures, raw food pics, weight loss, natural, health, simple healthy recipes, yoga, pilates">
<meta name="description" content="Going back to the natural lifestyle through the raw food diet, fitness, natural curing, and the scientific knowledge we have today! We have very simple raw food recipes, jokes, pictures of raw food eaters, weight loss tips, chat, and other very special information!">
<link rel=stylesheet type="text/css" href="/main.css"></head>
<body>
<br>

<body background=/1.bmp>

I think you should use some more css to cut down on the html atributses and clean up your code.
If your gonna use css go the whole way and dont just put five lines

lianabanana — Mon, 02 May 2005 13:15:17 +0000

It's "Back to the Natural Lifestyle"
And I've cleared up the logo

mjmtaiwan — Sun, 24 Apr 2005 17:40:02 +0000

I think ... first the name is not the best... it doesn't make grammatical sense - back to nature ... sure... back to natural sounds forced.

The photo makes me feel...somehow.... uncomfortable.

Is foodism a word? ... and if it is I don't think it should be.

The text in the banner is pixilated - clean it up in photoshop.

pmj7 — Sun, 24 Apr 2005 17:29:27 +0000

In my opinion, the title graphic would benefit from a little more work. The leaf detail is difficult to make out, also the text needs anti-aliasing. Do you really need to use iFrames? I think the menu would benefit from a little organization - there are simply too many choices demanding attention, presented in a visually cluttered way. As Suzanne used to say, start with Validating!

Peter

lianabanana — Thu, 21 Apr 2005 02:14:02 +0000

I've made some changes. Is it better now?