Sierra Nomad — Mon, 28 Mar 2005 19:31:16 +0000

Thank you for the suggestions.

No sooner did I post this request than my web hosting company switched to a new system (resulting in graphics not loading, etc).

I haven't critiqued other sites yet (though I have looked at a few) simply because I don't feel qualified. However, I will take a look at the suggestions for critiquing and give my opinion.

Sincerely,

Jon Shannon
Sierra Nomad Photography

Waldo — Mon, 28 Mar 2005 19:08:21 +0000

Nice site, by the way I love Yosemite.

Megan — Mon, 28 Mar 2005 16:59:55 +0000

Hello, Jon . When you posted this thread you saw our posting agreement. We'd appreciate it if you would follow the guidelines there and review some other sites. If there is some reason why you can't or don't want to do this please let us know. If you need some help in writing your review we have created these tips for writing website reviews.

The biggest problem with this page is all the different font styles. Keep that more consistent, and left aligned.

farmer_Tom — Mon, 28 Mar 2005 15:43:23 +0000

Well, if its only gonna be a sales page, all your graphics need to load and your needs to be content centered. I think it would go a long way towards improving sales if you have a synopsis of the movie, some critic reviews (maybe from newspapers in the Yosemite area or from outdoors magazines) and prehaps even a small clip of the video to entice buyers.