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    <description> &lt;p&gt;I wasn’t making an excuse for that page, I was pointing out that he doesn’t really care about it. He just wants the clicks.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Sun, 20 Feb 2005 08:00:09 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>Ron R</dc:creator>
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    <description> &lt;blockquote class=&quot;bb-quote-body&quot;&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Ron R wrote:&lt;/strong&gt; Thanks you for exploiting a perfectly good network like adsense, and mess it up for all the little guys. Obviously your “first site” is a landing page.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Yeah, but that doesn&#039;t mean it should be a myriad of text-filled, and otherwise blank pages. Google ads just aren&#039;t atractive enough to be posted more then one time in a page, and this person clearly has no real html skills.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;• Sorry if I was too tough, it is just because the page is... well, blank.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Sun, 20 Feb 2005 03:18:53 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Thanks you for exploiting a perfectly good network like adsense, and mess it up for all the little guys. Obviously your “first site” is a landing page.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Sun, 20 Feb 2005 01:09:51 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Here&#039;s what i have to say on this... well, is it ok to call it a site? I mean, the dictionary&#039;s defenition for a website says a site is a set of interconnected webpages, usually including a homepage, generally located on the same server, and prepared and maintained as a collection of information by a person, group, or organization.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;I guess I&#039;ll review it, the 5 pages you provided are not what I would call content-rich, but the writting is well-done, and deffinately praise-worthy, for lack of a better description. I don&#039;t know of any site that is focused specifically on two similar diseases, but it is a nice idea, an original idea, so I&#039;ll give you points for that.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Design? Does your site actually have a design? All I see are a bunch of crammed in Google text links and your writing. You cannot call this a design because there are NO pictures, a design is a patern with which to decorate certain objects, and your pages are about as ornate as a beat-up stray cat. Please fill your site up with pictures, use your server, make forums, more pages, more everything. You have enough text to fill 40 pages of decorated content, use the writing you already have and add some nice pictures, a navigational menu, and hey, maybe less ads wouldn&#039;t hurt. &lt;img src=&quot;https://www.webmaster-forums.net/misc/smileys/wink.png&quot; title=&quot;Wink&quot; alt=&quot;Wink&quot; class=&quot;smiley-content&quot; /&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Sat, 19 Feb 2005 16:54:28 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;lol, did I hear someone say &quot;made for Adsense&quot;?&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Sat, 19 Feb 2005 16:33:45 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;There is a only a white page with plain black default text surrounded by ads.  This website does not have a nice look.  I dont think anybody would want to look at it.  You can do better.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Sat, 19 Feb 2005 15:36:21 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;There is nothing to review anyway I go to the site I get a white page with google ads.  Submit a site with some content after you meet the posting agreement.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Sat, 12 Feb 2005 17:23:09 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>andyy15</dc:creator>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Welcome to TWF!  When you posted this thread you saw our &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.webmaster-forums.net/newthread.php?do=newthread&amp;amp;f=10&quot; class=&quot;bb-url&quot;&gt;posting agreement&lt;/a&gt;.  We&#039;d appreciate it if you would follow the guidelines there and review some other sites.  If there is some reason why you can&#039;t or don&#039;t want to do this please let us know (if you have problems with your english, for example).  If you need some help in writing your review we have created these &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.webmaster-forums.net/showthread.php?t=24973&quot; class=&quot;bb-url&quot;&gt;tips for writing website reviews&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Thu, 10 Feb 2005 14:26:53 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>Megan</dc:creator>
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