Old Socks — Mon, 29 Mar 2004 11:41:44 +0000

Sorry but im going to agree with everyone here.

The colour scheme doesnt do it for me. Nor does the navigation. Pages are too loooooooooooooong..........................

Still good idea putting up all the resources for people to be able to watch the video's !

A lot of people wouldnt have thought to do that.

unitunes — Sun, 28 Mar 2004 23:10:17 +0000

the immediate problem with the site is that i had to scroll from left to right on the screen - this is a big problem which you need to sort out. Also your homepage is too long - consider splitting it up into more pages.

You need to bring some structure to the site to make it more pleasing to the eye. The yellow background is not a nice colour to look at...consider something more pastely mabye.

You have obviously thought about the content - now you need to think about the image of your site....create your template to match your primary market....

hope this helps!

counterfeit — Thu, 25 Mar 2004 20:10:43 +0000

I have to say... that site is rather ugly. I really dont like the "red on yello" thing you have there,a nd also, why is all your content on one page? You should divide it into sections; Flash, Images, etc. Without it your site seems a little cheap and poorly made. With a little work, I think it could be a good site though.

fifeclub — Thu, 11 Mar 2004 18:20:08 +0000

In some ways it's clean. Grapics are sharp, background isn't distracting, and there is some consistency throughout.

Make navigation smaller.

Stop with the alternating red and yellow text colors. I can see that you're using it consistantly as part of you brand identity. Being consistant is good, but this yellow/red checker boarding is just distracting. Oh, I'm not a fan of the "bubble edges" around your navigation links but if your insist on keeping it, use it much less. Maybe one border around the entire naviagaion area instead of around each individual link (if you must keep it at all).

As for the copyright material, I happen to be a tv producer. None of that stuff is mine but to be honost I'd drop the hammer on anybody I found serving up my material. (I do know guys at the agency that made that Lassie ad.) You may think it's free advertising and you're not making any money, but "we" like to keep tight control over the image of our product. If we don't think a site is up to our high standards we don't want that association made with our product. Big heads up on using any material that's not yours, whether it's video, games, images, whatever.

But good luck. Stick with it and keep learning.

tenchi_63 — Thu, 11 Mar 2004 17:46:23 +0000

No Frontpage!!! Eeevil Eeevil!!

surfwaterford — Wed, 10 Mar 2004 23:37:56 +0000

why dont you use frontpage...............handy, or maybe you are??

what prog are you using for web design?

iamlost456 — Fri, 05 Mar 2004 03:00:15 +0000

Wow, definitely agree needs navigation. Try to make like sections instead of just one big long long long page!
I would really work on organizing the page before adding anymore content.

SirHans004 — Mon, 01 Mar 2004 00:08:08 +0000

I mostly agree with tenchi...
The content is good, though not everything is funny to everyone.
The template is O.K, but it could be better. It looks slightly tacky.
Personally, it's acceptable if the webmaster did not have time on their hands to learn XHTML and CSS and did not have the ability to create a better design.
That's all.

Simpson_121919 — Wed, 25 Feb 2004 18:57:06 +0000

Thanks for the input

tenchi_63 — Wed, 25 Feb 2004 18:22:34 +0000

aaaactually, I was not at all offended by the video. I'm just simply saying that anyone who finds this video funny needs help. You are here to get your site critiqued, meaning that you can get positive as well as negative input. Yeah, most of my input was negative, but I'm entitled to that opinion. Also, if you don't want to use a template thats fine, I never said you HAD to, but do look at some, just so that you get some idea of what a website should look like. Here is a link that i always share that may come in handy: http://www.wpdfd.com/

Good luck with your site.