cjb_89 — Wed, 26 Nov 2003 22:02:51 +0000

First i thought it was about selling something and then i relized that it was about websites

cbc58 — Wed, 26 Nov 2003 00:52:21 +0000

Hi-

Took me longer than 5 seconds to figure out what it was...
something about referrals.

I think you're asking for too much in too little time. Keep
it simple.

Just my thoughts.

Good luck.

writingwizard — Tue, 25 Nov 2003 13:50:17 +0000

Looks nice, but I agree with the others - it looks like a scam/junk marketing.

I'd lighten up on the lingo and the bold fonts.
The colours do go well together, though.

disaster-master — Fri, 21 Nov 2003 14:52:47 +0000

The only difference I see is the tagline. One says "Money Empowered Tell a Friend Service for Your Web Site" and the other says "The Tell a Friend Tool for Your Web Site".

Thanks

Michele — Wed, 19 Nov 2003 23:52:19 +0000

Your comments, suggestion and corrections are very helpful. As a consequence I have prepared a draft of a new home page.

It partially addresses the color issue, the issue related to the main heading text and the typos.

I would love to hear your impression before I publish the new home page.

Which one do you like the most?

Current Home Page: http://www.123referme.com/default.htm

New DRAFT Home Page: http://www.123referme.com/default1.htm

Thanks,

Michele

nice job

DanielJay — Mon, 10 Nov 2003 17:33:51 +0000

Well, I think the website had done a fairly good job. After 5 seconds I didn't know what the website was offering, however, after 10 I did!

I like the use of 'white' space. I think that to make the message clearer you should move "The Tell a Friend Tool for your website" more to the right and make it much larger and in the teal area between the two blues at the top of the page.

Good luck!

Daniel

Alpine — Sun, 09 Nov 2003 04:08:59 +0000

Hmm... in 5 secounds the page failed to load. Then i refreshed and it still failed to load.

My Impression = BAD!

Script — Sun, 09 Nov 2003 00:02:10 +0000

I'm guessing both.. but more so the words. I actually like the site design.

Michele — Sat, 08 Nov 2003 22:06:29 +0000

Thank you for your impressions. I would like to better understand if your "Junk Marketing" impression comes out from the web design (e.g. the colors) or from the words (e.g. What do you sell?...)

Thanks

iBold — Wed, 05 Nov 2003 20:26:38 +0000

Yea, took me at least 10-12 seconds to figure out (I only stay 15 seconds or so, so let me know if I'm wrong..) that you sell 'tell a friend' software of some sort. I agree with the above here - I wouldn't have stayed just cause it looks like a junk marketing site..