spor — Tue, 02 Sep 2003 12:09:10 +0000

Hello joe
Even though the site itself could do with a little jazzing up, the content, your stories are very well written, so the tarting up of the site will be the icing on the cake.
Good luck with the site.

The Webmistress — Tue, 02 Sep 2003 07:52:42 +0000

Welcome to TWF Joe

Can you please review some of the others sites in the critique section as per the posting agreement.

Thanks

tuffy — Tue, 02 Sep 2003 03:34:43 +0000

Hi,

Thanks for sharing your site.

I would recommend adding a link in your black box menu for your stories. You could then list your stories on a separate page. That way all links to your site and subpages are listed in the menu box.

cheers,

joeyadel — Tue, 02 Sep 2003 02:12:10 +0000

Thank you ShaneS. I've posted my URL.

ShaneS — Mon, 01 Sep 2003 23:48:17 +0000

Umm need a URL