Busy — Fri, 18 Apr 2003 02:51:26 +0000

you should fix the background so it doesn't repeat on the longer pages, and as mentioned don't center all your content
I'm not to fond of the green but each to their own I suppose.
You have a lot of content on there and takes a while to load for the old dial up

NEVER use the width and height tags to resize your images, example, the first thumbnail on the photography page is 367kb, my slow connection only loaded 3 of 10 before timing out

I also have a very slight horziontal scroll bar at 800x600

DaveyBoy — Thu, 17 Apr 2003 11:06:08 +0000

its a great design, although i don't really like the repeating background image.

Renegade, have you made any other sites? there's only one in your portfolio.

Renegade — Thu, 17 Apr 2003 10:30:45 +0000

Not too bad a site though it looks too static, make the links do something on hover - change of text-decoration and colour maybe?

The site does take a while for me to download but I guess that's quite typical of a graphic showcase site

Using a high resolution, I see a lot of white space to the right of the page.

Good work thought, keep it up

The Webmistress — Thu, 17 Apr 2003 07:01:50 +0000

It's green! Maybe a bit too green for me but it's not at all bad and generally I like the graphics/design. I get a small horizontal scrollbar at 800*600, seems to be because your top graphic is 780 wide (although the table it's in is set to 769) and the most you should go to is 770 to fit within 800*600.

On your 'HTML Guide For Begginers' parts of the links are in red, why? Looks odd to me. On the actual lessons pages you have the large chunks of text centered, DON'T, it makes the text hard to read and doesn't look professional.

In all very good, only thing I'd add is some colour to the hover on the links, maybe an orange.

spor — Wed, 16 Apr 2003 23:44:29 +0000

Hello.
I really like this site.
Nice colour scheme and layout is pleasant.
Nice work.
Good luck with the site.

oce222 — Wed, 16 Apr 2003 21:48:38 +0000

Oh and you also spelled "professionals" incorrectly... and the word "unique". Run spell check on your stuff to keep it professional looking..

oce222 — Wed, 16 Apr 2003 21:47:44 +0000

Hey... I love the design... one error... it should be: "This Site's Purpose" rather than "This Sites Purpose"... other than that I really like it... good job!

The Webmistress — Wed, 16 Apr 2003 18:50:37 +0000

Welcome to TWF Simon

Could you please review some of the other sites posted in the critique section as per the posting agreement

I'll have a look at the site in the morning for you