The Webmistress — Wed, 16 Apr 2003 13:55:52 +0000

Welcome to TWF Arun

We do ask that before you put a site up for critique that you help out by reviewing some of the other sites in this section.

Being in the SEO business myself it's always interesting to see what others are doing! I agree with Andy that you need a logo. No matter what a website is selling/promoting it needs branding and yours doesn't have an identity at the moment. Also that first page is way too long, it should be a few paragraphs containg what the site is about and what you do, with the other information split into other pages. Google likes larger sites so making yours easily crawlable and bulked out is important, as you should already know. Also a couple of your links open up new browser windows which shouldn't happen.

spor — Wed, 16 Apr 2003 13:50:19 +0000

hello.

First of all, i like the overall look of the site.
but one thing i would say, is the table on the right seems a little out of place, as its all alone there, hehe if that made sense.

My personal views on top ten placements is, i dont trust them, i mean what if one million people asked you to guarrantee a top ten place, its impossible, theres only 10 top ten places, thats what comes to mind immedietly, so others might think the same.. anyhow this a view from an average web surfer with a website that one day might need placing. potentially one of your future customers.

andy206uk — Wed, 16 Apr 2003 11:33:16 +0000

Hi,

The site doesnt look very proffessional... you could do with a solid nav bar and a graphical header at the very least... its too blocky at the momment. I don't think i'd ever purchase anything of a company unless they had a half decent website.

Also, do you have a decent ranking on google? people won't believe you can do it, unless you've managed to do it for yourself.