thedawg — Tue, 11 Jun 2002 12:22:44 +0000

Quote: Originally posted by lollybob
The server L33T seems to have crashed or something:mad:
I cant even access FTP or EMAIL:(

obviously a free host

lollybob — Mon, 27 May 2002 01:28:58 +0000

The server L33T seems to have crashed or something:mad:
I cant even access FTP or EMAIL:(

pennyshares — Sun, 26 May 2002 18:27:07 +0000

I am having a problem with your link, either it's very slow or the URL is wrong.

lollybob — Sun, 26 May 2002 02:17:41 +0000

I know I need to change the colours....
Its really just a personal site about me, so with respect to content, there isn't to much to add. I do wanna add some graphics though.

My counter is causeing the and tags to disappear:confused:

jackson992 — Sat, 25 May 2002 20:55:42 +0000

hi i am new and as such I thought I would offer my initial impressions.

1. At first glance I like the site. It looks organized and well laid out. I wonder a little at the colors tho. You may want to experiment with either different color combinations or with a background image.

2. You have lots of interesting links but I'm not sure what the focus of the site is. You may think about what that is for you an highligh it at the top center of the page. Ask yourself why people should come to your site.

Hope this helps!

disaster-master — Sat, 25 May 2002 03:39:48 +0000

Hi lollybob,

It would be greatly appreciated if you help out and review 3 other sites while you are here. New critiquers get brownie points for doing this.

It is a little plain looking as it is now. I take it that you will be adding more stuff--graphics, content.??

Displays differently in browsers:
IE 6.0--I think it looks as you intended.
Opera 6.0--Moves the footer to the bottom of the right column.
NS 4.79--Sorry but the old NS killed your page. It is readable for the most part. Some of your layers overlap.

I see you are using an XHTML doctype. If you are gonna keep this you really should make sure that do the code properly.

You have this in your code:
and it should be this:

Here are a few other XHTML things to keep in mind that I noticed when running your page through W3C validator.

Write all of your tags in lowercase. instead of

Your break tags and any other empty tags should look like this (for example);
instead of

instead of

Here are two good links with general quidelines to follow.
http://www.nypl.org/styleguide/xhtml/guidelines.html
http://www.alistapart.com/stories/betterliving/

You need and at the bottom of the home page. didn't check the others.

Oh, I also thing that the top part is screaming for a graphical logo. Something colorful and lively.