dragon007 — Sat, 19 Jan 2002 20:29:33 +0000

umm...
well, it's not really hosting company! it's a webdesign company. but thank you for the compliment anyway!

scole — Sat, 19 Jan 2002 15:23:59 +0000

Very well designed site and the pages load quickly. The site gives the impression of a very professional hosting company that customers will want to do business with.

dragon007 — Thu, 17 Jan 2002 10:49:24 +0000

thanks voxunity.com and Gadget Girl for the compliments, it's nice to hear some encouraging comments from time to time.

mmi, thank you soo much for your suggested edits. i appreciate very much your help.

just gimme MONEY, that's what I want - just gimme mo-o-o-o-o-ney

mmi — Thu, 17 Jan 2002 01:09:35 +0000

hey dragon007 - some suggested edits:

you use website, web site, Web site, and Website on yer front page - all are perfectly acceptable, but you may want to choose one - with "Website Design" in yer menu, it may be easiest to use one word, capped where appropriate

I realize it's an image, but you may want to go with "F.A.Q." rather than "F.A.Qs"

I might drop the commas in the "All Websites Feature" list

I'd hyhenate "no risk" (adjectival compound)

Pick a design from our state-of-the-art gallery. We have 100 web designs to choose from[delete],[/delete] - you'll definitely find "s o t a" without hyphens in a lot of docs, but I'd cite these guys - one two three

Customize your Web site's look and feel. If you...

Preview your website. When you are satisfied, you can...

your own site manager (see a demo).

first 3 months[delete].[/delete]

DC_Sara — Wed, 16 Jan 2002 22:53:34 +0000

Hi,

I didn't get to see the site evolve, but I love the end result! The colors are really excellent and not too much on the page.

Sara

voxunity.com — Wed, 16 Jan 2002 00:53:36 +0000

Looks, very nice, job well done. The men-u at the top looks excellent.

it's all in the...

mmi — Thu, 10 Jan 2002 16:18:59 +0000

Quote: I'm sure mmi will point out in more detail

what, you think I need t' do this?? - I can stop anytime I want

Pick a design from our state of art gallery; we have 99 web designs to choose from.

::disk limit reached::

::searching::

sorry, dragon007, some kinda glitch here - contact mme for further copyedits

dragon007 — Thu, 10 Jan 2002 13:48:57 +0000

definitely, i'll keep you updated with all the changes. thanks very much for your concern.

The Webmistress — Thu, 10 Jan 2002 13:06:23 +0000

Don't forget to let us know when you've changed anything so we can see how you are getting on with it.

dragon007 — Thu, 10 Jan 2002 12:45:43 +0000

wow
thanks very much everybody, i am very pleased with all your commnents and suggestions.

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It's a nice looking graphic but it doesn't seem to match the look and feel of the rest of the site. The area directly beneath it looks rather empty and the design style there is very similar to what I've seen on tons of other pages. Maybe try to think of something different for that part.

i agree with you megan, i am not satisfied with it my self! i am still thinking of something different there. and thanks for the grammar and spelling thing.

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On the FAQ page, you may consider making the whole question a link as well as the >>>> at the end of each question...I almost missed this as the >>>> sorta blend in.

the reason why i didn't put the whole question as a link, is that i find it confusing in other websites, i never knew when the question ends, but maybe i should change that >>>> to something clear!

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One other "little bitty--almost not noticable" thing. You have a small section of the image below that is not even for lack of better words to describe it. I put a red line so that you can see where the color change is. Just above the red line is a bluish white and below it is white.

yes it's true, the colors are a bit "different". it happened when i was trying to cut the size of the graffics.

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Finally, I think you should alter the typography for "Web design solutions that give..." The following are only suggestions.
Firstly, drop the capital "T" on That."
Secondly, change the color of "that give you" to the gray you've used in "Functional, Robust..."
Thirdly, use an italicised, (much) larger, light, serif font for "FREEDOM" in small caps. Layer it so its behind all the other text.
Lastly, change the color of the key words "Fucntional," "Robust" and "Affordable" to the same color that you've used for "Web design solutions."
Try them out.

thanks Abhishek Reddy, i will try what you suggested, and i will see what i will get. very appreciated!

cheers everybody.