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    <description> &lt;p&gt;thanks&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Thu, 13 Dec 2001 23:32:41 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;you can get older versions of Netscape here &lt;a href=&quot;http://home.netscape.com/download/archive.html&quot; class=&quot;bb-url&quot;&gt;http://home.netscape.com/download/archive.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Thu, 13 Dec 2001 23:24:41 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Oh and thanks for wishing me happy birthday &lt;img src=&quot;https://www.webmaster-forums.net/misc/smileys/smile.png&quot; title=&quot;Smiling&quot; alt=&quot;Smiling&quot; class=&quot;smiley-content&quot; /&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Thu, 13 Dec 2001 22:23:56 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Phew wow, this IS a good forum.  First off, thanks everyone for their helpful replies, and thank you Megan for clarifying (I see it now &lt;img src=&quot;https://www.webmaster-forums.net/misc/smileys/smile.png&quot; title=&quot;Smiling&quot; alt=&quot;Smiling&quot; class=&quot;smiley-content&quot; /&gt;).   The portfolio page seems to be irking people.  Sadly I can&#039;t directly change this (the site is a two man project, that was the page he made).  But I will bring it up with him, I&#039;ve also stated the problem to him.  Ok the main thing that stuck out to me were the MANY issues with Netscape &lt;img src=&quot;https://www.webmaster-forums.net/misc/smileys/sad.png&quot; title=&quot;Sad&quot; alt=&quot;Sad&quot; class=&quot;smiley-content&quot; /&gt;  Seems like I need to do some major reviewing in Netscape.  The problem is that I don&#039;t have 4.7, can someone direct me to a place to get this version?  If its still available that is.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Did the flash page really load 229 kb?  It&#039;s actually just loading 80kb.  Ok, but yes I do find your comments helpful( especially the Netscape ones!  Thanks!) and I&#039;ll get working over this weekend.  Thanks again everyone, you guys are great.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;-Kevin&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Thu, 13 Dec 2001 22:18:03 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;blockquote class=&quot;bb-quote-body&quot;&gt;&lt;p&gt;Quote: &lt;em&gt;Originally posted by khu19 &lt;/em&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;strong&gt;Thank you for that lengthly reply, I do appreciate it.  You made some very good points.  First off, for the Illicit site, the splash has to be redone I agree 100%.  You said I should mess around with plain solid boxes on a plain background.  Sorry I do not understand, maybe I&#039;m reading it wrong.  Could you explain?&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/blockquote&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Just as an exercise to really see how your layout is workiing.  There&#039;s so much else going on there that it&#039;s difficult to see what the problem is, which I think is the arrangement of the boxes.  So if you just made them plain solid boxes on a plain background it might be easier to see what you should do.  &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;So if you did something like this:&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;img src=&quot;http://www.meganjack.com/layout.gif&quot; alt=&quot;&quot; class=&quot;bb-image&quot; /&gt;  &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;See what I mean now?  It&#039;s easier to see what the problem is without all the other stuff getting in teh way.  You can see that that&#039;s not exactly a pleasing arrangement.  Lots of weird sections of white space, it doesn&#039;t align will, the spacing isn&#039;t consistent etc.  So if you did that in flash start moving those boxes around and resizing them it would be easier to come up with a better layout without having to mess around with everything else that&#039;s going on in your design.  &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Here is one arrangement I came up with - there are others that could work though:&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;img src=&quot;http://www.meganjack.com/layout2.gif&quot; alt=&quot;&quot; class=&quot;bb-image&quot; /&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Thu, 13 Dec 2001 14:33:00 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>Megan</dc:creator>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;I guess I need my head read, sorry to be the bearer of bad news &lt;img src=&quot;https://www.webmaster-forums.net/misc/smileys/sad.png&quot; title=&quot;Sad&quot; alt=&quot;Sad&quot; class=&quot;smiley-content&quot; /&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;The first site, illicits splash page is very loud (bright), the text cant be made out in Netscape 4.7, viewing it in IE i see it says &quot;Best viewed in Internet Explorer 4+ at 800 x 600 or higher screen resolution.&quot;&lt;br /&gt;
having to wait for a 229kb flash file to load, hope its worth it (normally i wouldnt wait, I&#039;d just leave)&lt;br /&gt;
likes ok but the dancing white dots are annoying and the small black text is hard to read over parts of the graphics.&lt;br /&gt;
I have no idea what this site is about lol, the title mentions wallpapers, flash, web design but umm ok, you need a icon/banner for sure, i only went to the tutorials page, your links dont loo like links, the word flash does but thats not a link. I like the colors and design but could of been done as well without the flash, do you have a non flash version?&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;The coi site looks great, but you need to compress your graphics, especially the top banner takes a bit to load.&lt;br /&gt;
I am so glad I have IE to read things on sites lol, the &quot;Welcome to COI Designs&quot; bit in Netscape is unreadable, the background image is bleeding thru, also the cap C (done with css doesnt display as you intend either, its just a normal c. The alignment of text to the image on the right (cool graphic) is too close in Netscape, updates is also unreadable, the portofolio page has a lot of the bleed thru on your boxs, netscape doesnt like color-graphic-color, it always ends up color-graphic-graphic, use a 5x5 image of the color you want to use instead of the bgcolor if nested.&lt;br /&gt;
Again the links dont look like links, i thought there wasnt anything there yet, &quot;view&quot; usually means &quot;look at&quot; not &quot;click to view&quot;&lt;br /&gt;
the contact page is also at 100% in Netscape, netscape doesnt do form widths the same as IE&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;a little bit of fine tuning and you&#039;ve got yourself a couple of great sites&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Happy b day in 28 days btw &lt;img src=&quot;https://www.webmaster-forums.net/misc/smileys/smile.png&quot; title=&quot;Smiling&quot; alt=&quot;Smiling&quot; class=&quot;smiley-content&quot; /&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Thu, 13 Dec 2001 08:58:17 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;BooooHoooooHooooo.....I&#039;m taking my toys and going home.&lt;img src=&quot;https://www.webmaster-forums.net/misc/smileys/wink.png&quot; title=&quot;Wink&quot; alt=&quot;Wink&quot; class=&quot;smiley-content&quot; /&gt; Can&#039;t compete with those. I like them both other than a few things that have already been mentioned.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;COI&lt;br /&gt;
The boxes on the portfolio page were a bit confusing to me too.....not bad, just looked like something else should be there.&lt;br /&gt;
Top logo is taking up too much space. It looks good though...real clean. I like the colors.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;ILLICIT&lt;br /&gt;
I like the sound effects. The page looks a bit crowded but it is way too cool.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Nice sites you have there.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Thu, 13 Dec 2001 06:21:03 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Hello there!&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;On your first site:  &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.illicit-designs.net/main.html&quot; class=&quot;bb-url&quot;&gt;http://www.illicit-designs.net/main.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
I agree with Megan.  I just have two more things to add.  one - The graphic that&#039;s a background (the pointy arrow thing) is too dark on my screen.  I have a hard time seeing stuff because of that.&lt;br /&gt;
two - there is not any text that tells you off the bat who you are and what you do.  I know that you do design work - but I still think that you should tell visitors.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;On your second site: &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.coi-designs.com/main.html&quot; class=&quot;bb-url&quot;&gt;http://www.coi-designs.com/main.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
The only thing that really stands out to me is the portfolio page.  The boxes are confusing and it just us not working for me.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;That&#039;s it.  Good job on those sites - they are really good!&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Brooke&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Thu, 13 Dec 2001 03:59:55 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Wow, lemme rub my eyes first &lt;img src=&quot;https://www.webmaster-forums.net/misc/smileys/smile.png&quot; title=&quot;Smiling&quot; alt=&quot;Smiling&quot; class=&quot;smiley-content&quot; /&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Thank you for that lengthly reply, I do appreciate it.  You made some very good points.  First off, for the Illicit site, the splash has to be redone I agree 100%.  You said I should mess around with plain solid boxes on a plain background.  Sorry I do not understand, maybe I&#039;m reading it wrong.  Could you explain?  Your comments about the animation and arrow, I also agree. &lt;img src=&quot;https://www.webmaster-forums.net/misc/smileys/smile.png&quot; title=&quot;Smiling&quot; alt=&quot;Smiling&quot; class=&quot;smiley-content&quot; /&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Ok onto the next site, lol.  Aw you don&#039;t like the cogs? &lt;img src=&quot;https://www.webmaster-forums.net/misc/smileys/sad.png&quot; title=&quot;Sad&quot; alt=&quot;Sad&quot; class=&quot;smiley-content&quot; /&gt;  Yes I feared that a 3d look would not work well for some people, guess I guessed right.  Your comments about the size and nav are also helpful, I will take those into consideration.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Wow, I just want to say thank you.  I&#039;ve posted my sites in about a dozen forums and nobody has given me such a thorough reply.  Thanks Megan and keep up the great work with the forum!&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Kevin&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Thu, 13 Dec 2001 03:03:25 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Illicit Designs&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;The splash page is okay, although I would like to see something a little more impressive as far as graphics go here.  The I&#039;s in the logo look a bit fuzzy to me too.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;On the main page you need to have a logo, that&#039;s the most striking thing.  The other major problem is the arrangement of your boxes.  Try playing with plain solid boxes on a plain background.  If you were to do this with your current layout you&#039;d notice a rather ackward arrangement of white space.  Something needs to be done about that.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Slow down those page fade-in animations too, and make those scroller button on the front page look like arrows so people will know what they&#039;re supposed to do.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;COI Designs&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Those cogs just aren&#039;t doing it for me.  Or maybe it&#039;s the combination of the cogs and the rest of the design.  Hmmm... I&#039;m trying to think of what you could do with those.... easiest solution would be to lose the 3D effect.  That&#039;s a very striking style that&#039;s difficult to work with.  Those 3D square thingies do look good against the checkered background.  It kind of reminds me of CAD - you could do kind of a CAD inspired thing maybe.  What you need to do here is pick a design style and really go with it - what you&#039;ve got is kind of wish-washy as far as style goes.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Otherwise, the top logo area is much too big - it&#039;s taking up too much space above the fold and I don&#039;t see a navbar.   Oh, there it is, at the bottom.  Should be moved up to the top.  I&#039;m not keen on that grey-red gradient either.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Do I need my head examined or what?  &lt;img src=&quot;https://www.webmaster-forums.net/misc/smileys/grin.png&quot; title=&quot;Laugh&quot; alt=&quot;Laugh&quot; class=&quot;smiley-content&quot; /&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Thu, 13 Dec 2001 02:29:28 +0000</pubDate>
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