Megan — Wed, 21 Nov 2001 14:12:03 +0000

I agree with Busy - that text is giving me a headache written like that and the addition of some yellow would look good. Or red as 1st said. A photo of a car somewhere would be a nice addition as well.

Oh, and I don't know if this has been mentioned already but it would be a good idea to find a better web host...

The Webmistress — Wed, 21 Nov 2001 08:49:56 +0000

Much better now you don't have to scroll down to see it!

It definitely needs some colour though in my opinion, I see teal or something similar. The links could either be rollovers, or have the background boxes for the links coloured. The top of the box that says .:CARS:. looks like the very top of it's been chopped off. Have text as text not as graphics though.

How are you going to expand for more content?

Busy — Wed, 21 Nov 2001 07:59:58 +0000

Its looking better
the text section should be text thou, as a graphic ita a little blury.

The design, to me looks like it crying out for some yellow, maybe its just me.

dont forget to change your title, at the moment it says "cars_main.gif"

webfreak — Wed, 21 Nov 2001 03:15:53 +0000

Guys, thanx i have taken into account all of the comments and improved my site
http://www.angelfire.com/ab5/df/Cars_Main.htm

You made me laugh...

1st — Wed, 21 Nov 2001 03:00:12 +0000

I'll tell ya what maybe its just me but I thoght it was a cool site I would ad some red to make it more mars like. the Cars from Mars is catchy and made me laugh. All in all I feel its COOL.

gavin681 — Tue, 20 Nov 2001 21:40:26 +0000

You need to add some color and the sharpen the text. Maybe add some banners to fill in the empty spaces. This will also add some color to your site.

All the best,
Gavin

openmind — Tue, 20 Nov 2001 19:06:16 +0000

Well I just went back for another look and its improving
The menu bar is much better further up but the text on the bar looks real fuxxy...

Once you add bit more color and a few images (although I can't talk, the only images on my site are banners at the mo!!) I think it will improve dramatically...

ZoomPosters.com — Tue, 20 Nov 2001 14:27:22 +0000

I use Netscape4 in resolution 800x600.

You don't have a html title.
The text images have very low resolution, the text don't look good.

The design is very good I think, though try to make it a bit lighter and add a color to some of the design elements. It looks a bit dull otherwise.

The Webmistress — Thu, 15 Nov 2001 08:37:48 +0000

I have to agree with the general consensus here I'm afraid. With this kind of interface layout it all really needs to fit on the screen at 800*600. It's harder to critique as there is no content but it is very dark as well, although the green on the links does brighten things up, when you get to it.

How about moving it up & having the menu & main part flipped up into the part currently above it and have the 'Cars from Mars' going off more from the top to the right and get some colour into that logo.

openmind — Wed, 14 Nov 2001 22:54:13 +0000

I'm sorry but I really don't like it.

Having to scroll down to reach a menu is a definate turn off. The menu bar should be much further up...
Its an interesting design just way too gloomy. Very heavy on grey and no other color at all...

Adding a logo would also go a long way...

Sorry to be cruel but life is full of personal opinions!!