BOF — Fri, 07 Sep 2001 12:25:29 +0000

Couldn't view the second one - 404 Not Found!

Could I advise a spelling check - grammer!?

Nice layout, but I couldn't fall in love with your colour scheme. That's a very subjective view, though.

Keegan — Fri, 07 Sep 2001 09:08:27 +0000

Yes, yes (not really), no, no, I have over 140 DVD's

I will forget you are trying to get me into a discussion about piracy if you do not mention it again.

To clarify, disabling the right click menu is pointless. View source, file save as, my 9 year old neice would laugh at it.

Find someone else to fight with punky brewster.
You ask for a critique, then you complain.

You need some manors considering
http://www.webmaster-forums.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=15289

and here
http://www.webmaster-forums.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=15273

and here you offer very little as your critique (critique 1)
http://www.webmaster-forums.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=15366

A side comment that is not even speaking directly to the original poster that asked for feedback (critique 2), if you want to call it that.
http://www.webmaster-forums.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=15231

Spend some more time actually working on your site. There are so many copy cat educational kid sites out there, and yours is no different. Consider the comments not for your benefit but the benefit of your viewers.

That is why we do this, to help sites out.

I took your comments just as they were put, argumentative, provacative and naive.

I cannot speak for anyone here but I can say that you are not contributing anything except trouble.

Rock on jabba

Keegan — Fri, 07 Sep 2001 02:35:47 +0000

... added below message just for you

jinxuk — Fri, 07 Sep 2001 02:29:00 +0000

pretentious ? contempt ? bit strong. do you complain to software companies who try to protect their products?
do you think warez is a good thing also?
if i copy games and dvd's was it the manufacturers fault for being pretentious trying to stop me with serial codes and passwords?

anyway apart from that thanks for the comments

Keegan — Fri, 07 Sep 2001 01:51:42 +0000

I would get rid of that right click disabled garbage. It is pretentious to use on a site geared for kids, and shows contempt for them.

The upper left graphic needs work, It needs a clearer definition of color and perspective.

The upper right button text is too small to read and is irritating to try to read.

Do you have cgi-bin access? I would get rid of the branded counter and install another (If you need help with this I would be happy to)

I can send you science projects that you can use on the site if you grow to the point of having space for them.

I have over 600 now and are formatted for them, just don't have a place to host a site for them right now.

I would be willing to send one new one a month as well to help you out.

Work on making the images text clearer.

jinxuk — Fri, 07 Sep 2001 01:34:01 +0000

ok last time now, i went with new index page , critique on rest of site please. And could someone else with kids PLEASE test some of my worksheets out on them
Thanks for any help

Fringey — Tue, 04 Sep 2001 03:56:42 +0000

I agree with keegan but the little circle things with the subjects are just too removed from the rest. Make them fit together more and into the page more, it will look more.. professional. Also, the litte images at the bottom are [ointy-looking... like, the edges are too ragged. Plus they're rather unclear, it's kinda hard to look at. Try to fix that.

Keegan — Mon, 03 Sep 2001 23:50:26 +0000

I personally like the second one.

The second one begins to ask for a large icon graphic.

Upper left, reason is that your have cool icons on the pages and perspective imho begs for a large upper left graphic.