stunnerz — Fri, 03 Aug 2001 13:49:05 +0000

Not to keen on the "Welcome", its the part that stuck out as being a bit jagged and big, maybe a smaller greeny/grey/white graphic would look nicer.

nice design though!

punkk — Thu, 02 Aug 2001 21:22:00 +0000

I personally don't think it's THAT dark. I think it's really easy on the eyes actually. I like the color scheme on it too. The only reason i might not want it dark would be the psychology of having a dark website...kinda dreary and depressing...as opposed to something that's brighter and less depressing. Might subconsiously bring more business to you...

Cheers
PUNKK

Fringey — Thu, 02 Aug 2001 01:08:36 +0000

The second one you posted is really nice, I think. But it IS a little dark, you could fix that by changing the black bgcolor to something less... black.

Brooke — Wed, 01 Aug 2001 21:49:00 +0000

Wayyyyy better IMO. If people think that it's too dark then you could make the lowest box (where all of the text is) white.

Good job!

BTW - how long have you lived in EP? That's where I am from!

Brooke

The Webmistress — Wed, 01 Aug 2001 09:13:57 +0000

I like the logo & the layout, although I'm not 100% sold on the colours. It's a bit dark but with content that may change.

You have a scroll bar at 800*600

one more I hope

Shotaker — Wed, 01 Aug 2001 09:08:15 +0000

Here's another one I've been working on..

http://www.paul-lang.com/new/index2.html

Critique away!

thanks again everyone

Shotaker — Sun, 29 Jul 2001 23:26:22 +0000

Thanks again everyone for all the positive feedback! I made a few of the suggested changes..

image

Abhishek Reddy — Sun, 29 Jul 2001 04:45:26 +0000

looking good! i really like the logo .

i like the idea of the pic. it adds that personal touch. maybe you could give it a couple of effects? a gray/blue border? rounded corners? maybe lighten the background a little, or have a new one thats zoomed in a bit?

the quote is pretty good too.

irrelevant: when i see "Paul-lang" on the window title or status bar the "l-l" looks a lot like a "H".

disaster-master — Sun, 29 Jul 2001 04:34:02 +0000

I like the picture. It gives the viewer a person to relate to. The quote that you have under the pic works together well with the pic to in converying your thoughts. Nice touch.

I like the navigation at the top. It is clean. The nav at the bottom seems like it needs just a tad of white space below it. It looks too jammed up against the bottom of the screen.

I would get rid of the horizontal rules. They seem to take away from the crispness of the site.

Overall, I think it looks good so far.

disastermaster

keit — Fri, 27 Jul 2001 14:23:42 +0000

I like the design, it's very clean and simple and works well. It is hard to gauge it properly without it having more content, but it's definately on the right lines. The page loaded up quickly and the navigation is clear and effective.