suggested edits

mmi — Mon, 26 Feb 2001 20:03:15 +0000

"one stop" is typically hyphenated - typo in "conact us" - instead of "At this site, there is..." how about something like "We offer..." - "re-organized" and "re-designed" typically are not hyphenated - "Your Site Can Affect Pageviews" - "copyright ©" is redundant but commonplace - on About, this sentence, "In this area, you can learn more about this site. The different pages are listed below.", is kind of unnecessary - typo in "Demostrates" - on Privacy, "opt-out" typically is not hyphenated - the text in Build is redundant - in Newsletters, typo in "do'sd" - typo in "E-commerece" - in Submit, typo in "E-mals like this will be ignored." - also, you might want to say that another way, e.g., "We cannot respond to..."

CorbbmaccO — Mon, 26 Feb 2001 03:15:26 +0000

Thank you for the feedback Adam.

Adam Oberdorfer — Sun, 25 Feb 2001 22:05:53 +0000

Here are my initial thoughts:

a) The width looks alright on my screen size but 790PX is not a standard resolution. Seeing that you have no margins 760PX would be the appropriate width for the site.

b) I like the navigation element however the way it connects with the top header is sort of odd.

c) I'd suggest adding some type of mouse-over or effect to the navigation.

d) There is a black line border on the header but not on the side or navigation.

e) The logo could use some help. Try adding some color other then blue, light blue, dark blue, or white

f) Try to come up with a different way to display your front page content. The tables are sooooo standard.

In terms of the forum:

a) AHHH! Change the colors! I don't like the color scheme at all. They do not compliment each other or the site blue.

Good luck with your site. My overall critique is make your site look unique, let it standout. There are too many sites that all look the same out there...