Peter J. Boettcher — Mon, 12 Feb 2001 13:39:35 +0000

mmi,

I haven't been online in a few days, so I was very suprised when I saw all the comments you left! I don't handle most of the website content but I'll be sure to pass on your comments.

Once again, thanks for the comments & suggestions!

bet you're REAL glad now that I went off my diet

mmi — Sun, 11 Feb 2001 20:19:31 +0000

hmmm, can't seem to get that paragraph up again - is this a "cookie consequence?" - I tried looking in History and I can get the error page but not that first look - shoulda taken a screenshot - well then I guess I'll just hafta obnoxiously edit the copy on this highly complex image - I'd draw an analogy here - (you think my editing style is a little what? ) - when you open the sentence "technology and business", my brain (old software, I'll admit) lays out "space" for two ideas - then it turns out that these are adjectives qualifying "expertise" and, of course, you do correctly use the singular verb form "has helped" - but the damage is done - I've stopped reading with you - my browser has "gagged" on the code a little - I'd look to say UL's "expertise in technology and business has helped companies..." - if you were writing / publishing / selling software or manufacturing hardware or something, I could see wanting to put the company name right next to "technology" - but since you're selling these business services, I guess it's expertise you're selling - (btw, should I have a clearer idea by now of what these services are? - I guess a click on "pro services" will reveal, but...) - I know, like I keep saying, that people don't edit imaged text willingly, esp. an image like this where each line break can be critical - but I guess the point I'd make is that when you get "used to" a sentence, esp. a thoughtful one like this, it can start soundin' a lot better - in fact, this sentence is kinda growin' on me and I do like it better now - but that's my point - you can lose your perspective very quickly - of course the way I reacted to this sentence may be peculiar (wouldn't be the first time) - but these browser stats are harder to collect, so I think you just need to err on the side of being EXTREMELY demanding of your imaged copy exactly because you won't want to change it - anyway, let me give you maybe one useful idea at least - how about a button that allows me to view the film and hear the sound instead of the autoplay setup - I was scanning the page at first (hoping the audio would stop - couldn't turn it off because I wanted to hear if it would stop) and I didn't really experience the video and audio the way you want - the film seems a lot better when you listen to the sound and experience it as one event and that didn't happen for me - of course this is only a first-time viewer concern but...
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I meant to say I'd leave out the "major" in "major companies" to make sure non-majors feel welcome - the impressive nature of your client list will be self-evident

[Edited by mmi on Feb. 11, 2001 at 03:30 PM]

HIGHLY sophisticated displays

mmi — Sun, 11 Feb 2001 18:43:30 +0000

good transfer news this time - like I said, I've had problems late Sat night before - with "cookie warning" in force, only a few seconds to say to "cancel" to about 15 - accepting cookies, about two seconds - I'm not very familiar with using audio files, but can ya loop this thing a few times and STOP IT !! - okay, I found the sound button - is the "on/off" prompt reversed? - I realize this is imaged text, but I'd say just "connecting to their clients and employees." - I'd think about hyphenating "web based" but, as I say so often in these cases, the problem with that advice is it's not a word - you capitalize "internet" the first time but not the second? - "cost effective" is typically hyphenated - by mentioning clients and employees at first and then saying you "help clients" it sounds like you're leaving ther poor employees behind - how 'bout "UL can help you realize..."? - I know people will say "can" isn't as "strong" but to me it's more accurate - in the blurbs on your press releases, I'd take the periods off since they're not all sentences - and I think I'd go with "Technology IS converging..." and "...THE same legal weight..." - maybe drop "newly" in "newly redesigned" - in the News headings, I'd take "Provide" and "Expands" out of caps like "celebrates" - I looked at hosting and a two-second scan led me to "A series of options are available in order to tailor" - you may want "...is available to tailor..." - for some reason, I just don't have the spirit in me right now to work on a site like this where the copy is real clean to begin with and suggested edits are all judgement calls - I know little if any of this will be of use to you but I may come back later to annoy you further

Grandmaster — Sun, 11 Feb 2001 16:43:28 +0000

MMI, If your cable can get it in 30-40 seconds, maybe his server is SLOW.

Adventures in the Kitchen

mmi — Sun, 11 Feb 2001 07:47:08 +0000

Quote: George Costanza: AHA !!

well, I appreciate the effort you're making to do this detection but as you can see from the posts in this thread, it gets complicated - again, I won't preach to you about "keep it simple" ("sorry, I'm not stupid" ), esp. since I'd say most of the small amount of worthwhile things I do on my site grew out of ideas I fought to implement across this maze of download speeds and platforms and browsers (and their versions ) and viewer preferences, etc. - but I want to suggest to you that you keep an open mind on the whole concept of how viewers are delivered to your site - it may be that in the short term, you should keep the detection set up largely the way you have it now and try to troubleshoot it - but if it turns out that in the medium term you go to a different way to handle this, you might want to try to anticipate that now - I guess the problem there is that the tech environment will be so different then that you can only work on this in the short term - if I have a valid point at all it may be that old "forest and the trees" thing about making the correct strategic decision and not simply disposing of technical problems - I suppose I'll hafta pour a glass of milk, grab a plate so I won't get any crumbs in the keyboard, and try a few cookies
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can't get your site right now even after 30-40 seconds, but this hour in the week is not a good one traffic-wise from my experience - still, I've got a cable line, so I'd say that might be a sign of a problem

AndyB — Sat, 10 Feb 2001 22:07:10 +0000

IE5/NT/1024px/56kb - took longer than I would wait for any site unless I really, really wanted to be there (or was there for a critique:)).

The opening is a little disconcerting (regardless of connection speed). Most visitors would expect something a little more related to your product than looking at a page that only says 'browser detection'.

And the only other thing I noticed in a quick visit was that the window of text directions to your real site opens in a pop-up window that isn't big enough for the width of the content and it isn't resizable.

rjs — Sat, 10 Feb 2001 12:31:50 +0000

I, too, am stuck on the ::detecting browser:: page.

I use IE 4.0 on a PC, Windows 98. I've got Javascript enabled and I've got Flash, though not the latest version.

Seems to be an error in the browser detection script. Even if the script can't recognize the browser version the visitor should be taken somewhere.

reciprocity

mmi — Sat, 10 Feb 2001 00:27:24 +0000

some 'a my favorites are right here - just click on "cookies"

nike_guy_man — Sat, 10 Feb 2001 00:12:21 +0000

Very Nice...
Only thing is I looked at the hosting part but couldn't find any specs on it... size, price, bandwidth

Maybe I just missed it.
Very nice looking nice work!

Peter J. Boettcher — Thu, 08 Feb 2001 17:38:32 +0000

Arryob,

Were you using AOL? I seem to be having a problem with my detection script and AOL users.

mmi,

You're right I should have a better explanation on the error page detailing why they should enable cookies for my site. I'll make a point of updating that when I get a chance.

Thanks for the suggestion, I'll have to "send" you some cookies