Parker — Mon, 22 Jan 2001 17:05:43 +0000

It looks better now. It is filled out and covers the whole screen. The logo needs some more work though. Also like you said, you have to get some content.

You guys are rough.

OperatingZone — Mon, 22 Jan 2001 14:49:21 +0000

Alright, I worked on my logo and filled out the site some. I still have some bugs to work out and alot of work on content.

Thanks for being, ...uhh truthful.

Megan — Mon, 22 Jan 2001 14:09:38 +0000

I see the logo now - I don't know why it wasn't showing up the other day. That needs work - badly. Try using a more original looking font or maybe a little symbol that represents your site - something more interesting is needed.

Parker — Sun, 21 Jan 2001 16:43:24 +0000

Logo shows up for me. The colors look better now, but like Megan said you should make the background color to the dark red that you have. It will make it look more "filled out"

Megan — Sun, 21 Jan 2001 14:42:29 +0000

Your logo graphic isn't showing up for me for some reason. Without that the design looks really, really boring. What you could do is make your page background coloured (like that dark red you have) and then have the content area on white still. That would probably liven things up a bit.

Oh, and change "top" to "home" - that "top" thing confused me for a minute there.

Hey thanks,

OperatingZone — Sun, 21 Jan 2001 10:26:32 +0000

I'm not to good with colors. Made some changes, me thinks the colors are little more catchy now.

Thanks for the critiques!

http://www.operatingzone.com

nice platform

mmi — Sun, 21 Jan 2001 05:11:11 +0000

I'd say this site is very clean snd professional-looking - I don't have any problem with the colors - all I'd say is you could try to make things a little more "filled out" - (I realize you say you're just starting out the development here) - in "nor sponsor any software.", I'd change "nor" to "or"

Parker — Sun, 21 Jan 2001 00:15:14 +0000

It looks good. Just a little small though on my screen. I see no problems just the colors are kind of...ugly. I have said this before try using colors that match like a football teams because they always have colors that go good together.