NUR — Sat, 21 Oct 2000 12:03:57 +0000

Impressed by the speed of this site, heavy fast dowload, but i don't like the design at all. But don't consider this last opinion couse probably u don't care bout design here.
But by my taste i'ld escape from it immediately becouse of colours and poor design. Btw i'm a sort of silly artist n i'm not happy if i don't see a smashin'mouth thing.

So givin away my useless thoughts, the speed of you site is ages far by my capabilityes. Thank you.

THE NUR.
http://www.TheNur.net

Parker — Sat, 21 Oct 2000 03:21:24 +0000

Pretty nice.

- As said by Megan there is way to much text on the first page. Spread the information out into different pages.

- I like the colors they look good.

- I also like the logo that's nice too.

- Having the picture of the book up in the corner is good.

All in all pretty good site just cut down on so much text.

Megan — Fri, 20 Oct 2000 01:05:51 +0000

The first thing that srikes me about this site is that there is way too much text on the first page. If I randomly came upon this site, I would want to know what you are offering in a more straightforward manner. I'm not going to read that whole page of text just to figure out what the site is about. There is a paragraph halfway down the page - "In this e-book 'Creating your own Ultimate Cashcow,'...." - that tells the reader exactly what this site is about - this paragraph should be up on the top of the page in bold or larger font or something. That is what people need to know right away.

The second thing that strikes me is the grammar (ie. improper use of midsentence capitalization). The text doesn't flow very well at all. You should really get a professional to go over this for you. It also sounds very vague to me - I'd want to know more speicfics about the program before I would buy into it. (like some information about the author and why a person should trust his advice) It also sounds like a whole lot of marketing bull$hit if you ask me but hey, some people might buy it.

As for the design, well, I'm not exactly thrilled with it. Take the overabundance of logo backgrounds, for example, or the outdated bevel buttons, or the boring logo. What I would do with the logo is get a nice drawing of a cow's face and put it right next to the text. That would be good.