Medrecki — Thu, 28 Sep 2000 19:37:16 +0000

try useing amore modern looking font.

benji — Wed, 27 Sep 2000 20:20:32 +0000

Turn the green into Blue and see what it looks like.
The green and blue don't mix.

JP Stones — Wed, 27 Sep 2000 17:22:35 +0000

I don't actually like the sun logo. It just does not hit me as a good brand identity.
JP

Brooke — Tue, 26 Sep 2000 22:36:32 +0000

A couple of things:

I don't understand the point of the empty space at the top.

I would try to do something more with the font - it's just straight text and really doesn't stand out. You really want the logo clean and cohesive. It's the one thing that people see first.

I personally think that colors do not go well together. All except for the two greens in the box. Those go together. But the bright green dollar sign and the bright blue background just need to go. If you want to use those two greens, trying picking a marroon, tan, brown, navy blue....

Brooke

Not bad

Technel — Tue, 26 Sep 2000 00:08:08 +0000

Not bad,

It is clean
Try using up the negative space
Try a nicer font in the lower section
The green is...well unusual. If you want to keep the green try working a small amount of white in to counter balance the solid look.

Have a good one
Doug

Mike Fisher — Thu, 21 Sep 2000 03:25:30 +0000

Erm.. [because I reply to everything even if I don't have an answer] I must withdrawl my opinion, because I am an Abstract Designer, and shouldn't review contemporary designs because I'd have a slant to the Abstract.

Parker — Thu, 21 Sep 2000 02:17:47 +0000

I think it looks good. It is very big though. It's nice and simple and very clean. Like Justin said it looks old fashion. Make it look newer and more modern. Then it will be great!

Justin S — Wed, 20 Sep 2000 19:32:06 +0000

I don't like it much. It looks old fashioned. Like it was made in MS Paint. The background color of the page doesn't help it at all either.

- Too big.

- Ugly green color. But that's just my opinion.

- Doesn't go with the bg color.

- Looks old fashioned. Like it was made in MS Paint.

I say get a good graphic design book then try making a logo.

-Moved-

Brian Farkas — Wed, 20 Sep 2000 02:34:25 +0000

Moved from graphics/design help forums --> web site critique area.

- Brian

Mark Hensler — Wed, 20 Sep 2000 00:09:12 +0000

It's simple, but clean.