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    <description> &lt;p&gt;I would tighten up the text on the main page a bit.  It seems to be intruding upon the turf of the gray table.  Maybe shrink the  width from 590 to 550 or so and possibly justify the text.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Viewed on IE5 at 1024x768.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Sat, 08 Jul 2000 02:06:42 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>Pat Burroughs</dc:creator>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;The logo has less artifacing now but the edges still have some smoothing out needed.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Brian Wilmot&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Sat, 08 Jul 2000 01:32:17 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Looks better, but there&#039;s still room for improvement!&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Fri, 07 Jul 2000 11:52:51 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Brian,&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Your point is well-taken about the text on the opening page.  I have had a lot of trouble explaining the concept of my site to others, and am trying to make it clear -- probably not too successfully, either!  Probably have gone overboard with the explanations, so I&#039;ll revisit the content of that page ASAP.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Comments and suggestions are welcome from all!&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Thanks,&lt;br /&gt;
Kristen&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Thu, 06 Jul 2000 19:41:51 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Ok fix those images and they&#039;ll worl great. &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;There is too much competeing text on the page. The main body just strikes me as a jumble of letters and words. Get rid of some of the color/bold/underline. Manybe just take the highlights of it. Not all the information. Condense, Condense!&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Brian Wilmot&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Thu, 06 Jul 2000 02:37:24 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Ahhhhh that is much better!  Now the site feels centered.  The rounded edges are better too - though they are still a little on the jaggy side.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Good job!&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Brooke&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Wed, 05 Jul 2000 19:06:02 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Looks the same in both IE5 and NS 4.7 for me. But I agree that the graphics ar both really fuzzy and jagged along the edges...&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Wed, 05 Jul 2000 18:03:49 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Thanks Brooke.  I changed from .jpg corners to .gifs and although it looked pretty good on my screen before, it looks even better now.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Glad you checked Netscape, too, as my job is in a Microsoft shop where I only have Explorer.  I try to only play around with table changes at home, where I can verify that they still work with Netscape!&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;The hex logo had been on the right, directly over the nav bar, so I reversed the page top to keep that relationship.  Should be more what you&#039;re looking for.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Thanks again,&lt;br /&gt;
Kristen&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Wed, 05 Jul 2000 17:58:36 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;KLWong,&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;I looked at your site in both IE (5.0) and Netscape (4.72).&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;The colors look fine in both and so does the layout.  The rounded edges on the table, however, are really fuzzy and jaggy looking.  Those need to be cleaned up.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;With the three buttons off to the left, it is pushing the logo (title) off center and that feels off.  The logo (title) should be centered on the page.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Brooke&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Wed, 05 Jul 2000 17:10:08 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>Brooke</dc:creator>
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