Nico — Sun, 11 Jun 2000 04:52:00 +0000

Thanks Neil!
I just fixed what you said and also added some more stuff.
Thanks again!

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skirrow — Sat, 10 Jun 2000 19:14:00 +0000

Hi,
I really love it! Nice one! Has to be the best I've looked at in this forum yet!
All I can say is line the top images (logo + banner) and bottom copyright bit up with the main table! If you did that it would look great!
Pity I don't know spanish! After a year of it at school they chucked me out. (of spanish that it)

Neil

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Nico — Fri, 09 Jun 2000 18:10:00 +0000

Thank you guys! I just did what you said. I separated the logo from the ad and make the AUTOR bigger.
I just don't know what cool graphic I could add it to make it cooler, I visited www.devshed.com but still don't have an idea.
Thanks a lot for your critic!

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Megan — Fri, 09 Jun 2000 14:36:00 +0000

I agree with most of what has been said before - cool colourful graphics (like most of the top development sites use) would be a good addition. Just make sure that you're using the exact same shades of blue and yellow for everything (the colours in the logo look a bit different from the blue and yellow on the rest of the site.)

Also, the text underneath the logo is too pale - it's hard to read, and the banner ad is too close to the logo. There should also be a little bit of space between the ad and the top of the page.

Justin S — Fri, 09 Jun 2000 13:06:00 +0000

1) I don't think the site needs more color, 'cause I count about 5 different colors there. I think what may help though, is if you add some pictures next to your headlines, sorta like what www.devshed.com does. That would add a cool touch to the site.

2) The logo and the add are two close together. Try moving the add to the very right of the page. That would look better.

3) The AUTOR word is smaller then the rest.

4) See the lines that seperate the content area? Well the first three are a different color then the two after it. The top three are thicker, while the bottom three seem to be 1 pixel in height. I like the 1 pixel in height ones (which are the bottom two).

5) At the very bottom of the page on the right there is some text (En este taller encontrara...), but the problem is the last line is cut off.

6) Make the copyright info at the bottom at size 1 font, so it doesn't stand out so much. You also might want to move it away from the table a bit.

Overall I think it looks good (just some minor things listed above), and is a big improvement over the current design...

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johnnyboy — Fri, 09 Jun 2000 09:23:00 +0000

Nico,

1) Needs just a hair more color. Maybe put a jpeg somewhere above the fold.
2) On the gray nav bar across the top, Autor is a size "1" and the other words are size "2".
3) Try rounding the corners of your table to add some interest to your page.

Overall, it looks good. Just a few minor changes is all it needs to make it shine.

John

jackchen — Fri, 09 Jun 2000 05:28:00 +0000

Well, first, I don't know Spanish. The site looks a little plain to me. A bit more colors and some graphics may help.

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