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    <description> &lt;p&gt;If you could add your logo into the main picture, that would look great. If you made the text white, with a black outer shadow, that would make it stand out some more. If you want me to help you make a logo, just drop me an email. I can help you out if you wish.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Thanks,&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;GraphicalD &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.graphics-universe.com&quot; class=&quot;bb-url&quot;&gt;http://www.graphics-universe.com&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Mon, 15 May 2000 18:35:00 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;I agree that it&#039;s a little slow loading.  But I also see another problem.  It&#039;s your home page.  Not quite a splash page, but it&#039;s not a full blown home page either.  I kind of felt like I came to the middle of the site somewhere.  I feel like there needs to be a little more information about your site on the home page.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Brooke&lt;/p&gt;
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Providing quality websites for businesses and individuals!&lt;br /&gt;
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     <pubDate>Mon, 15 May 2000 15:43:00 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Thank you so much for your replies! This really helps us a lot and we look into each of your recommendations!&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Great board  &lt;img src=&quot;http://www.webmaster-forums.com/ubb/smile.gif&quot; alt=&quot;&quot; class=&quot;bb-image&quot; /&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Mon, 15 May 2000 15:20:00 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Very original design...&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;1) I agree that it&#039;s slow loading time. I think it&#039;s the actual server, and not the actual page + graphics. But that could be also be the reason. &#039;Cause the big picture of the desert is 31kb, which could take a little while to load.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;2) I like the menu a lot. I would move the Terms and Conditions up there also though. I also wouldn&#039;t have the &#039;|&#039; in the beginning or the end of the menu.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;3) Some of the pages make it scrollable on 800x600 resolution. For example: the About Us page.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;4) The logo could be much more interesting. Either add some color, or design, or even a different font would solve this problem.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;5) The main page needs a line of text explaining what the site is about.&lt;/p&gt;
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My name is Nitsuj. I bet you&#039;re thinking WTF...&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Mon, 15 May 2000 13:58:00 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Yup, slow loading is probably the main problem.  I&#039;m suspecting it&#039;s your server, not anything you&#039;ve done with the page but I could be wrong on that (make a really basic HTML page, upload it and see how long it takes to come up - that&#039;ll tell you what the problem is)&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;The site does look nice though.  You might want to try doing something more interesting with your logo so it stands out more.  I like how you&#039;ve used photos from different destinations.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;You also have to make your navigation more apparent - a lot of people wouldn&#039;t know that some of these things wre linked (Like the arrows on the guest user page)&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Another thing that you might want to do is to find a better way of organizing your navigation.  I&#039;m kind of lost in here, and some things are opening in new windows which just makes it more confusing.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Mon, 15 May 2000 13:38:00 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>Megan</dc:creator>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;I experienced a very slow load (over a 56k modem) and blank page for 15 secs before I saw anything ... and the first thing I see is an entry to secure area box ... and then it&#039;s slow again.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;So, lots of your &#039;visitors&#039; may have hit the back button long before they reach your content.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Dreaded horizontal scroll appears at screen size less than 800 px - irritating and easily corrected.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;It wasn&#039;t obvious where the content was .. until I found a guest button.  You could make it more obvious how new visitors could see the type of content available.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;.. and using a text link that says [more] would make it more obvious how I got more information about places, instead of the arrow in front of the paragraphs (which I thought were just decorative until I moused over one).&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Mon, 15 May 2000 12:21:00 +0000</pubDate>
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