Brooke — Mon, 15 May 2000 15:38:00 +0000

I like the font for the logo, but agree that it just doesn't fit with the rest of the site. Definitely do not use that font for the navigation - it's too hard to read. It's not just having matching fonts that makes if feel together - it's the overall look. The text is very artsy with smooth edges. But the rest is blocky with hard edges. If you want to use that text, then you have to make the rest of your site feel soft and smooth.

Brooke

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Megan — Mon, 15 May 2000 13:49:00 +0000

I like that font you used for the title, but again, it doesn't go with the rest of the site. The second one is not quite right either. You might want to try some fancier nav buttons or something.... Using that font for nav on your second example might not be a good idea because it is a little hard to read. A thicker border around the site, with some curved edges would be good. What would be cool is if you could put a border around there that looks hand drawn like the font. More design elements like that would be good.

Mon, 15 May 2000 11:04:00 +0000

ok now compare http://design.doubleok.com/index.html
with http://design.doubleok.com/?portfolio.html

and be brutal!

Mon, 15 May 2000 06:12:00 +0000

I don’t care for the java script effect on the links. Try using images with a rollover or just CSS effects. When I put my mouse over the links I can’t click or do they light up. I have to position the pointer exactly on the border for it to activate.

Maybe try putting the logo inside of a 600-pixel table or image centered above the body table?

You obviously have some more work to do and some content to add. I look forward to seeing the final version.

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jackchen — Mon, 15 May 2000 04:46:00 +0000

One suggestion here is to make the edges of the tables round. And also make the mouseovers with round edges.

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Parker — Sun, 14 May 2000 15:27:00 +0000

-I don't like the font you used on the logo either. It just doesn't fit.

-In the porotfolio area put a little thumbnail of the site next to the descriptio n.

-I don't care for the red a whole lot..it looks weird.

Other than that I guess it is OK.

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Justin S — Sun, 14 May 2000 14:06:00 +0000

1) I hate the font you used for the logo. Doesn't go with the rest of the site at all. Also- I can see where the glow is cut off on the left side.

2) The menu is ok. I don't like the white. It's too much of a change from the blue.

3) The design of the site is ok, but the one problem I have is how the logo and the body of the site look completely different. Try to tie them together.