JP Stones — Tue, 09 Nov 1999 18:24:00 +0000

Your bullet points are matted against the wrong (white) background colour (black).
cheers,
JP

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Travis — Tue, 09 Nov 1999 02:36:00 +0000

Get rid of the little images (the red squiggly lines, animation things) next to the links to the sections of your pages.
Make the poll look like this by using <,br,>
tages.
ie:
Question....
Good {}
Bad {}
Poor {}

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Carolyn Jones — Mon, 08 Nov 1999 21:19:00 +0000

Hi there,
First off I'm wondering if it should be called Park and Pat's rather than Park's and Pat's Playstation...... Just sounds better to me.
The overall design looks pretty good however there are a few empty spaces (right below the title image and above the banners on the bottom. The title image should be offset from the body text but since your menu extends further toward the top it makes that area look empty, you could just adjust your menu to start around where the body text does or move it up higher.
I think I'd adjust the poll so the radio buttons all line up just looks cleaner that way (right now they some of the buttons aren't even on the same lines as their descriptions).
Your mailing list is way down toward the bottom where it may get overlooked.

take care,

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Justin S — Mon, 08 Nov 1999 20:43:00 +0000

Has not changed much since you last wanted us to critique it...

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