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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Looks good.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;1) too much white space on the top.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;2) too much movement.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;3) the bottom looks unprofessional, i would get rid of the text.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;4) you might want to tell what the site is about on the main page, i still can&#039;t figure it out.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;5) the sub-pages look unprofessional. and i would get rid of the background on these pages.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Thu, 07 Oct 1999 23:41:00 +0000</pubDate>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;Your surrounding menu looked nice, but the rest of the page has a rushed look.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;A few things:&lt;br /&gt;
- I&#039;d consider making a background for the poll table and getting rid of the extra line break.&lt;br /&gt;
- Is that java really necessary? I had just finished my daily tour of zdnn and when I clicked on one of the headlines that interested me it didn&#039;t do anything but let me scroll the headlines at my own pace.&lt;br /&gt;
- Bottom part of the page needs some work&lt;br /&gt;
- Takes too long to load on my sloow modem &lt;img src=&quot;https://www.webmaster-forums.net/misc/smileys/sad.png&quot; title=&quot;Sad&quot; alt=&quot;Sad&quot; class=&quot;smiley-content&quot; /&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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Proud Internet Explorer/Neoplanet User at 800x600 res.&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Thu, 07 Oct 1999 19:27:00 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>Craig Holatko</dc:creator>
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    <description> &lt;p&gt;I&#039;m really rushed ta the mo, but I will just say that it looks very good but would benefit from less movement IMO on some of the buttons (ie radar).&lt;br /&gt;
JP&lt;/p&gt;
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     <pubDate>Wed, 06 Oct 1999 02:21:00 +0000</pubDate>
 <dc:creator>JP Stones</dc:creator>
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