Carolyn Jones — Tue, 29 Jun 1999 18:55:00 +0000

Hi Larry,
looks pretty good!!!
I would use the same font for your name on both the entry page and your graphics. You have some techno font on the first page and the opposite (old english style) on the graphics page. Keep in mind also that that font (old english one) is a display font (designed for larger point sizes) and loses a lot of the detail when it's made small "button size" , I can still read your buttons though.
I'm not sure how I like that pink color with the burgundy color, if I had to pick one it would be the burgundy .

take care,

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JP Stones — Mon, 28 Jun 1999 18:18:00 +0000

<I also did away with the awful. background> Sorry, a bit harsh!

Looks much better by the way!
JP

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L Davis — Mon, 28 Jun 1999 17:19:00 +0000

Hi
I took everyone advise and changed the site. I designed it around the new logo image. I am not quite finished with the changes but let me know what you think. I also did away with the awful. background and the clip art on the hosting pages and changed the background to the graphics pages. Thanks for everyone's suggestions you people were a big help.
charmgraphics.pageantworld.net

Larry Davis

Carolyn Jones — Fri, 25 Jun 1999 03:53:00 +0000

Hey Larry,
The last option from the second post wind hands down in my opinion!!!! It's very nice and stylized a lot more then the first page examples -- I like the colors a lot more then the green/red combination from before also.
You could take that image (or whatever comes of it) and incorporate it into the main page -- would be a nice change .
If you want to make your image look less clip-artish (JP's post) just try opening it in photoshop or whatever paint program your using, adjust the colors a bit or add an effect that makes them
look more original (I know you've already done that but it still looks like clip art--cartooney as I call it) just a thought.
As far as the professional backgrounds, I see them a lot (my AAT&T worldnet providers page for one) I'm not sure about the size, maybe try and find a few and take a look.

take care,

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L Davis — Fri, 25 Jun 1999 00:46:00 +0000

Thanks that is what I wish to know about. The good, the bad and the ugly.
Larry

JP Stones — Thu, 24 Jun 1999 20:51:00 +0000

Just a few comments:
- I like the new logo.
- Ditch the lined bg as it looks awful.
- I think you should use better images than the clipart one you currently have.
- for the requirements I would not use a list as it makes your column to thin.
JP

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Grandmaster — Thu, 24 Jun 1999 19:30:00 +0000

change the background on the hosting page, it make sit hard to read.. I like you logo, its pretty nice...
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L Davis — Thu, 24 Jun 1999 18:49:00 +0000

I come back to add a new option I just whipped out a new image that matches the hosting page better. http://pageantworld.net/charmgraphics/index.shtml. Would a index page look best made around this image. I would value your opinions.
Thanks Larry Davis