Brooke — Wed, 23 Jun 1999 02:37:00 +0000

'Blur',

I think the sites are nice looking! Here is some advice:

I agree that there is too much info on the home page of Nash net. Maybe you could break that up so it isn't so overwhelming.

I think that both logos need to be punched up. They are too small and light.

I don't particularly like the gray background on Nashnet. It makes everything kind of hard to see.

Because everything is so dark on Nash, I also think that the links are kind of hard to discern. Maybe making them a brighter purple or a different font to make them stand out more. (the links on unreal stand out much better - I really like how that site 'pops')

Both sites just need some graphics to break things up a little more

Overall really good job! I like them a lot!

Brooke

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Blur — Wed, 23 Jun 1999 01:44:00 +0000

Thanks for the input! I'll see if I can't get something new up this afternoon.... one question - do you guys think I should center NashNET? Thanks!

JP Stones — Tue, 22 Jun 1999 22:49:00 +0000

Unreal Realm critique on the way...
- weird feeling here that the site 'starts' to early... Myabe you could center the logo and incl. it into the table.
- I would reduce the border size to 1 or 2.
- please get some pictures!
JP

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Blur — Tue, 22 Jun 1999 20:30:00 +0000

It does look better, doesn't it?

Yes, I have seen the official page (http://www.nashbridges.com), but I don't really like the logo... Still not sure what to do, I want to keep it simple, and have it blend in well to the page... I'll make a post when I figure something out

Brooke — Tue, 22 Jun 1999 20:18:00 +0000

Ooohhh! Much better! Still is dark, but I can see things so much better and the links and logo are 'popping' much more!

Great job!

Brooke

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Carolyn Jones — Tue, 22 Jun 1999 19:42:00 +0000

Have you seen an official Nash Bridges logo? you would need permission to use it but it would work well. Or maybe take some clips (pics) of the characters/stars on the show and add them. Another idea would be to take a symbol/icon from the show (don't watch it so I don't have any suggestions) and incorporate that somehow.

take care,

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Blur — Tue, 22 Jun 1999 18:36:00 +0000

You guys were right, grey didn't look good. I decided to switch over to blue, and I'm alot happier with it.

I also switched the links from purple to orange, and they do stick out alot more.

I wanted to see how the page looks centered, and I like it. It looks better in larger screen sizes.

I'm still working on a new logo, but I'm kinda stuck, any suggestions?

Carolyn Jones — Tue, 22 Jun 1999 17:45:00 +0000

Hi Edward "blur"
I think your sites have an interesting layout. I think the first one, Nash, could use a brighter logo (picture), maybe highlighting some of the stars/sex appeal?
I'm not sure if you need that many posts "headlines"on the first page.
looks like a very interesting site for Nash fans
Other site looks about the same as the first one. I like the logo.

take care,
Carolyn

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Blur — Tue, 22 Jun 1999 17:19:00 +0000

Brooke-

Alright, thanks! Right now I'm firing up Photoshop to see if I can't throw toghether a better logo.