tony97 — Fri, 04 Jun 1999 17:57:00 +0000

Jim is right, it should be than not then. You use then like, "Then I went to the store," and than like, "I like chili better than soup." I like the page though looks awesome. Also here is a quote from the oddities page "Two thirds of the Earth's surface is covered with water. The land areas
only make up twenty-nine percent. " So 66 percent and 29 percent equals 95 percent, what is the other 5 percent?

Roo — Fri, 04 Jun 1999 16:42:00 +0000

Everything is good here except navigation. I hate to keep going back to get to another link. You should include all links on every page to allow your visitors easy navigation. The content is great I love the oddities page! Overall it's nicely done layout, graphics and content wise. Just do something about the nav system!
Roo
Oops one more thing All of your title graphics on each page lead me right back to the home page when I click. I really would expect be be taken somewhere else!

elara — Mon, 31 May 1999 17:46:00 +0000

Your site is great, the layout is clean and great. As for the fonts, I prefer Arial to Times New Roman . BTW WebTV viewers are increasing dramatically, white fonts over black background will surely mess up their viewers . Just my two cents.
Cheers.

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Mon, 31 May 1999 00:07:00 +0000

I loved the Horoscope, Metaphysics and Residents page. Then I went to the Science page. All of the sudden I was blinded by a stark white page. (I know it had an image in the background but the LCD screen doesn't show it that well.) I also felt that the images on the science pages were less artistic that those on the other pages. By that I mean that the other pages had the look of the masters, hand drawn charcoal sketches, inked drawings, etc. The science images were very one dimensional and flat looking.

I also noticed one spelling error on the science facts page?
Sound travels faster through steel then water.
I think it should read than. I might be wrong though. Any English majors out there?

Great site as always. Can't wait to get mine done and have you tear it apart for me.

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JP Stones — Sat, 29 May 1999 22:30:00 +0000

<so I wont "share" unless you ask>
Please do Carolyn...
JP

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fairhousing — Sat, 29 May 1999 20:09:00 +0000

As Carolyn said, it's yet another professional site design you've submitted for a critique. You must be making good money designing all these sites. Just curious how much do you charge?

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Carolyn Jones — Sat, 29 May 1999 19:00:00 +0000

Hi there,
Like your other projects I have been completely absorbed in this one
Front page: I really like the layout/look of your black shadowy background, looks more haunting then mystical though -- at least that's my first impression.
Heading could be more stylized -- like the other headings on the site -- without clashing with the shadowy background.
horoscopes--heading , could use a white line of text below it, I know it's not necessary (like we all know what a horoscope is right?) but I think it would balance the unevenly spaced blue headings.
oddities page:
what fun!!! Nice background, nice graphic -- interesting list of "oddities" "The blue whale's tongue alone is heavier than most elephants." ---that's really big!!
Metaphysics: numerology page---great heading
Metaphysics: crystals -- nice graphics
How do crystals work? No one seems to know for sure.<---I know of one interesting simple theory, not sure how far you want to "dive in" though or if it's relevant to what your looking for here--so I wont "share" unless you ask LOL.
Observatory residents:
clicked on that one, read it, then clicked on your "back" button on top, went back to "My cyber soup communities" instead of the page I came from.

Hope this helps, like your other sites, I could have spent much more time there, and may again later.

take care,

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