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I'm newbie about web designing (just 6 months), but I think I'm improving. I know there are some expert webmasters in this forum who can help me to improve my websites.
Please visit:
Learn E-Spanish and
Mi Peru
If you find mistakes, let me know.
Maybe I did something wrong.
Thanks Smiling

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Learn E-Spanish: - Nice design and colour scheme, although i do feel the navigation menu needs to be a bit bigger because there is a lot of wasted space. Other than that, I think there needs to be something on the front page that makes the site more appealing and draws you in. Otherwise a very good site, well done.

Mi Peru - although powered by a CMS thing, it is still nicely managed. Do be warned, however, that there is spam piling up on your guestbook. There is nothing else that is a major problem on this site, though.

Increasing visits - Simply: spread the word as far and wide as you possibly can: tell everybody and everything. But be warned - do not spam.

heebie.co.uk has arrived. Don't get the heebie jeebies.

Te audire no possum. Musa sapientum fixa est in aure.
I cannot hear you. I have a banana in my ear

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Possibly a little too much space on the E-Spanish one and the quote under the logo is partially obscured (at least for me).

Love the design of the Peru one, only thing I'd do is lose the hit counter (it looks amateurish whereas the rest looks great).

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E-Spanish:

This is a great start! However, I have a few problems with the website as a whole. It simply doesn't make sense to have the navigation and the slogan in Spanish. This is a site where people can learn Spanish, so they aren't going to understand it when they get here. I understand that there are translations for the links, but people just getting to the site won't know that right away, like I didn't. Not a bad design though.

Mi Peru:

I can't access this website because this error is displayed:

Quote:
Parse error: syntax error, unexpected '<' in /home/sopo/public_html/miperu/cmsimple/cms.php on line 149

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On eSpanish:

You may want to replace this paragraph

I'm peruvian and a Spanish speaker and my English is not perfect, if you find mistakes, fill the contactame form or emailme to learn_espanish@yahoo.com , Thanks.

with this

I'm Peruvian and speak Spanish. My English is not perfect. If you find mistakes, please fill the contact me form or email me at learn_espanish@yahoo.com, Thanks.

Also you may want to add a space between the last paragraph and the Adsense box.

I like the menu and the color scheme.

The other website was down for me.

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Nice design.
However I feel that menu should be more visible. And I personally, don't like
pictogram's in menu

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holly cra_ i opened you're site and adawear spy wear and my norton pop up and locked up my pc ????

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RaceHardnet wrote: holly cra_ i opened you're site and adawear spy wear and my norton pop up and locked up my pc ????

which one? please tell me, I found a file Thumbs.db in my website.
Could it be the reason?

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pepealayo wrote: which one? please tell me, I found a file Thumbs.db in my website.
Could it be the reason?

Thumbs.db is simply the cache of the thumbnails of the pictures in a folder made by Windows. This is harmless but also unnessecary on your webserver.

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bluecircle wrote: Thumbs.db is simply the cache of the thumbnails of the pictures in a folder made by Windows. This is harmless but also unnessecary on your webserver.

I'm wrong, this a windows system file, maybe the problem was my counter, I have problems with this.
Thanks.

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I like the e-spanish one alot. It's nice and simple and i like the rollovers. I can't really find much wrong with it personally.

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thanks to everybody.
I will consider your suggestions.
Sticking out tongue

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Why you have menu in different places. It is not user friendly.

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cms1 wrote: Why you have menu in different places. It is not user friendly.

They are different kind of menus.
I think this is not a problem for users.
Confused

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