What I need critiqued/reviewed.
http://www.wackythings.com
Let me know if I accomplished my goals.
1. Is it "incentivey" enough? i.e. If you were a typical surfer would you understand how to navigate to get free stuff?
2. How's the design? Does the color scheme fit the site well?
3. Content? Enough? Originally I was just going to make it an incentive site but I thought I needed alittle extra (funny pics, movies, etc) - this part is just underway so bare w/ me there. You can find that stuff under HOME.
4. The reason I made the index page not the home page is because my main goal for teh site was to get people to get free stuff rather than give them free jokes, etc (that is just a bonus). How do you feel about that?
that's enough for now!
All comments appreciated!http://www.wackythings.com
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The Webmistress posted this at 16:37 — 15th May 2003.
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Welcome to TWF,
I have moved this to the Critique section. Can you please review some of the others sites in this section, as we ask in the posting agreement you wouldn't have seen.
Cheers
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wackythings posted this at 17:26 — 15th May 2003.
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I reviewed 3 earlier. Maybe I posted in the wrong area?
wackythings posted this at 04:58 — 16th May 2003.
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I reviewed a bunch but no1 seems to review mine
princejones posted this at 05:18 — 16th May 2003.
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I really like your website. What I really like is the navigation buttons... they are clear... im trying to get mine like that. You're are certainly enticing and make me want to click a little.
I would post a privacy policy since you ask for e-mail to receive your gift. Without it may give impression that you are collecting e-mail addresses for spam.
Busy posted this at 07:14 — 16th May 2003.
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shame it's Continental U.S. only, I could have fun with a lot of that stuff
, although some of it I have never heard of. fart bomb bags?
I like the layout, nice clean colourful and easy to use but the down side of the way it looks is it kind of looks like one of those pop ups you get everynow and then.
I think you need to add the last Q&A on your faq page to your sign up page (who can use it).
it does sound to good to be true, but we arent here for that, you also need to state who can sign up for your affiliate program - if it's open to any country and payment options if is.
as for the index/home thing, I don't thin kit's important, people coming from searches etc could come to any page and probably wouldnt see the index, the navigation is clear so most wouldn't go back 'home' after moving from the index (if that makes sense) but clicking freestuff page from a page then going to home to make sure you have the right page could be confusing.
one thing that disappointed me, on the index page it showed what looked like a blow up flamed chair (pool chair maybe), clicked the link but it wasn't there and couldn't find it on the site
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The Webmistress posted this at 08:27 — 16th May 2003.
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I think you have done a good job here and don't really have much to add to what Busy said. One thing though was the actual logo, it's ok as it is now but how about trying it in a wacky font?
Julia - if life was meant to be easy Michael Angelo would have painted the floor....
wackythings posted this at 15:38 — 16th May 2003.
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I actually had a "wacky" font but those are harder to ready so I figured a little jumbled text might be bold and still work.
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Melter posted this at 13:52 — 21st May 2003.
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The colour scheme suits the image of the site, however parts of it also look like some dodgy promotion. I couldn't make my mind up whether you're offering retail/wholesale deals on these items, or if it's some sort of affiliate scam, especially with the free $500 offer! You could do to make it clearer what your site's main function is.
It looks like some of your button images don't load (the blue and white ones). You could do to make these clickable as the natural reaction is to try them.
If you click on the free cash tab the page changes but the tab stays on free stuff.
Hope that helps.
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disaster-master posted this at 14:51 — 21st May 2003.
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Three of the blue circle button with the arrow are not showing up for me. (under "4 ways to get free stuff")
Yes, I would click the "free stuff" button.
On the about page, there are several typos for the word gift. You have it spelled guft.
I suppose there is enough content. But if I were a "user" of your site the first thing I would want to know if how can you afford to give away things? Most people aren't rolling in money to be able to do this which makes me think there is an alterior motive. Sorry but I am very leary of things such as this. I guess there is a market out there though.
The home page should be the home page. If someone can't find the "free stuff" page then they are probably too ignorant to even sign up for anything.
IMO, I think you should add some text to the home page explaining a little about the site. Maybe something like;
"Welcome to Wackythings.com. We are a blah, blah, blah. We offer this and that and that. You can find this and this and this here. etc. Sign up today for your free whatever."
You could also add some text links at the bottom of the page:
Home | Free Stuff | Free Cash | Shipping/Payment | Link | Link ...
Sonia
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wackythings posted this at 17:56 — 21st May 2003.
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Where are the typos? I only found one for gift (guft)?
disaster-master posted this at 21:01 — 21st May 2003.
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I ran the text from that page through microsoft word after I found the guft mistake so it may have just repeated the error if I didn't correct it.
It's always a good idea to run your text through a spell check. I know, because I am the worlds worst at typos.
Sonia
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spor posted this at 23:17 — 21st May 2003.
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Hello
I like the colour scheme, and overall layout of your site, i wont comment on the content, as im allways dubious about this type of site.
But good luck with the site.
Cymru am byth
wackythings posted this at 23:22 — 21st May 2003.
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It's simple, people signup to sites for free, I get paid per referral, therefore I'm able to give away fre stuff.
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Suzanne posted this at 17:18 — 22nd May 2003.
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Wackythings, no advertising is allowed in your signatures. I've pm'd you and edited your posts. Please edit your signature.
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MrBaldwin posted this at 02:10 — 28th May 2003.
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Navigation is simple, colors are attractive, graphics all look great.
You've done a great job!
But who would want any of that stuff?
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Busy posted this at 08:03 — 28th May 2003.
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hehe I found a place here in NZ that has the blow up flame chair (same as on products page) so I brought it to add to my collection of flamed things - so I guess people like me would buy that stuff
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The Webmistress posted this at 08:11 — 28th May 2003.
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If it's free people want it
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AMD_PoWeR_tOwEr posted this at 00:29 — 31st May 2003.
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Its a nice site but i read a couple of other post that sugested a wacky or strange fontto go with the name. But ........ I think u should add a java script to the logo to make it dance or maybe the word wackystuff following the mouse courser around the screen. That would be wacky lol
But nice site I like the colors , they work good together and the layout is simple to move through
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