Hi,
This is my professional site. I used 3D art, flash animations, music and sound in the composition of the layout, creating atmospheres.
All the reviews are wellcome.
Thanks!
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Busy posted this at 05:54 — 8th May 2004.
He has: 6,157 posts
Joined: May 2001
Welcome and thanks for reviewing some sites first.
pages weren't made on 800x600 were they, scroll bars in both directions
At first I didn't realise what the two lil icons were, language icons, very hard to make out.
The text under "News" is very hard to read, almost didn't see it.
Sadly thats were my review comes to a stop, I don't have flash installed (nor want it)
What I did see looked good.
Might want to fix your html on your main pages, the meta and title tags are between the html and head tags, should be after the head tag, the iframes are ok, spoke to soon, half way down your iframe page you have an extra and
<?bhb if(broken){ echo("It wasn't me
"); } ?>
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Some people are like slinkies, they dont really serve any purpose but they still bring a smile to your face when you push them down the stairs ...
Suzanne posted this at 16:29 — 8th May 2004.
She has: 5,512 posts
Joined: Feb 2000
I'd review it only I can't see anything other than the interface -- Safari, OSX.
blelisa posted this at 19:28 — 11th May 2004.
They have: 31 posts
Joined: Aug 2003
I saw it and loved the creativity of your site!!
Very impressive!
I agree teh text was a little hard to read because of the size, but besides that I think it is great~
fastball1945@co posted this at 05:00 — 12th May 2004.
They have: 4 posts
Joined: May 2004
i liked your site..some things you might want to fix:
- try to clead up the 3d animation of the water and make it "flow better"
- Make the two buttons bigger in the splash...took me a while to notice them.make it longer...and fill it with more content...make it interesting and addicting.
eahcmad posted this at 06:33 — 12th May 2004.
They have: 5 posts
Joined: May 2004
I have found that the vast majority of visitors to sites of mine will decide within a matter of seconds whether they want to continue browsing the site... your splash page is pleasing enough to make visitors enter. You need to keep up that good work inside the site so you need to get the mixture of imagery and text right. You shouldn't under-estimate the value of good textual content - you have some grammatical errors in your text which need to be addressed.
Other than that... nice site.
andy206uk posted this at 11:19 — 12th May 2004.
He has: 1,754 posts
Joined: Jul 2002
A simple one for you. The first page of the main area doesnt say what you do. Just that your updating the site. People need to know what you do as soon as they enter, I think it would be more user friendly to make the "our goals" the first page.
Also, run the scroll bar the whole way up the side of the text box, rather than tiny at the bottom. I found it quite tricky to use because it's so small.
Andyk
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