Hi all,
this critique request is part of my course requirements, my professor wishes me to experience evaluation input not from a scholarly level, but from a peer and professional level.Here is my website url:
http://acadunix.algonquincollege.com/~yang0112/chorepal/home.html
Thank you very much
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dhotchin posted this at 20:33—17th April 2008.
He has: 183 posts
Joined: Nov 2003
Hi.
The site has no design, just text. Very difficult to understand what the site has to offer. Menu needs to be more clear. To make it look professional, each page should have the same look and feel.
zelazn posted this at 00:08—26th April 2008.
They have: 9 posts
Joined: Apr 2008
has an "amateurish" look-and-feel, ie like early 1990s websites. there are spelling mistakes (see spelling of bazaar in About Us page, dollar in Service Providers page). The intro blurb needs to have more buzz to it. At first read, its difficult to figure out what the site is actually for. the site needs a logo which should be repeated on each page. a side bar should contain links to each important page of the site.
RENDITION - http://renditiongame.tk http://www.renditiongame.tk http://renditiongame.googlepages.tk - a political art experiment in text adventure game form
JeevesBond posted this at 16:44—27th April 2008.
He has: 3,441 posts
Joined: Jun 2002
There's not that much to critique here, there's no real design and I agree with other people that it looks very 1990s.
The site is a little more complete than others I've seen from students at your college. It seems you prefer to code than design, which is fine, it's good to know your strengths and weaknesses.
The code is mostly valid, just one, little error. There are a lot of redundant styles in there, for example:
.style11 {color:#FF0000;font-szie:16}.style12 {color:#FF0000;font-szie:16}
.style13 {color:#FF0000;font-szie:16}
.style14 {color:#FF0000;font-szie:16}
.style15 {color:#FF0000;font-szie:16}
.style16 {color:#FF0000;font-szie:16}
.style17 {color:#FF0000;font-szie:16}
.style18 {color:#FF0000;font-szie:16}
.style19 {color:#FF0000;font-szie:16}
.style20 {color:#FF0000;font-szie:16}
.style21 {color:#FF0000;font-szie:16}
.style22 {color:#FF0000;font-szie:16}
Why would you do that? Also
font-sizeis spelt incorrectly, and classes or ids should be named meaningfully. It seems this CSS was generated automatically by an editor, and it shows!a Padded Cell our articles site!