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I have made a design for a postnuke template, using photoshop (I am going to pay someone to put it into postnuke form) Since I don't want to spend more money by designing another one, I want to make it look good the first time. So what you think of it?

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Hey, I like the look of that...

I would be happy to have that as a template

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Tis a bit dull in my opinion.

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I agree with Andy! Needs some more colour to bring it to life.

Julia - if life was meant to be easy Michael Angelo would have painted the floor....

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Like what colors and where? I uploaded a new gif so you can see the design with more text

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Black & grey is about as dull as it gets! Try adding an accent colour of maybe orange or yellow for say the links and in the logo somehow?

Julia - if life was meant to be easy Michael Angelo would have painted the floor....

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I agree the colours are quite dull...

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updated the image again, maybe it looks better??? You have to refresh the image to see the update Wink

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That orange is good but it needs to be incorporated more into the design rather than just around the form boxes. The top is now not right as the text isn't within the curve (which I'm not too keen on either). Do you really need to have the www. part under the logo?

Julia - if life was meant to be easy Michael Angelo would have painted the floor....

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So get rid of the osguys and the curve thing, correct? And put some more orange into it. Do you like the 2 bright lines around OSGUYS?

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Personally i would take the text in the curved bit off the top (linux, unix, windows, free bsd) and replace them with the respective logos for each OS. Would make the header more attractive whilst injecting some colour at the same time!

Why not try changing the dark grey bits to another colour? Perhaps a shade of blue?

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Good idea for the logo thing, I just might do that, as for the colors, I am working on it...

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If you want to stick to the black/grey then add another grey (lighter) to help seperate it a bit, (or even off white), things like #eeeeee and #f5f5f5 for the lighter side and lighten your dark grey you have now a tad.
Don't use black for your links, instead use a colour , red, yellow, green, pink, blue, orange or something with a different colour on hover

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My personal web site is in black and gray but then again it is a reflection of me. The design you did doesnt look vary origonal, ive seen simaler before. I think you sould come up with something more origional.

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bja888 do you have a spell checker Wink

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how about a '?' key for you webmistress? Sticking out tongue Wink

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Is it just me or is that link broken now? Did you take it the file down?

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My friend probably messed with the resell account, let me check